svn commit: r41667 - in projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook: basics users

[Tom Rhodes]

On Tue, 21 May 2013 16:35:18 +0200
Benedict Reuschling <bcr at FreeBSD.org> wrote:

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> Am 21.05.13 16:32, schrieb Warren Block:
> > On Sun, 19 May 2013, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> > 
> >> Author: trhodes Date: Sun May 19 00:01:57 2013 New Revision: 
> >> 41667 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41667
> >> 
> >> Log: Add more information on binary formats in basics. Add a
> >> note about sudo in the users chapter. Add a section on using root
> >> in the users chapter.
> >> 
> >> Modified: 
> >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >> 
> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.xml
> >> 
> >> 
> >> Modified: 
> >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >> 
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> >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml
> >>
> >> 
> Sat May 18 23:44:23 2013    (r41666) +++
> >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml
> >>
> >> 
> Sun May 19 00:01:57 2013    (r41667) @@ -302,6 +302,15 @@
> >> console none managing requests for hardware devices,
> >> peripherals, memory, and CPU time fairly to each user.</para>
> >> 
> >> +    <para>Much more information about User Accounts is in the 
> >> chapter
> > 
> > It seems odd to capitalize "user accounts" there.
> > 
> >> +      about <link linkend="users">accounts</link>.  For now you 
> >> just +      need to know that each person (user) who uses the 
> >> computer should be +      given their own username and password. 
> >> The system keeps track +      of the people using the computer 
> >> based on this username.  Since +      it is often the case that 
> >> several people are working on the same +      project Unix also 
> >> provides groups.  Several users can be placed
> > 
> > Needs a comma after "project".
> > 
> > Did not look at the rest, maybe later.
> 
> Also, the use of "you" is discouraged in the handbook.

Did I miss one?  I swear I cleaned that entire patch
up (re-wrote ~91% of it).  Some things I removed were
"you," missing markup, long lines, whitespace nits,
bad wording, etc.  Thanks, fixed locally!