svn commit: r41667 - in projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook: basics users

[Benedict Reuschling]

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Am 21.05.13 16:32, schrieb Warren Block:
> On Sun, 19 May 2013, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> 
>> Author: trhodes Date: Sun May 19 00:01:57 2013 New Revision: 
>> 41667 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41667
>> 
>> Log: Add more information on binary formats in basics. Add a
>> note about sudo in the users chapter. Add a section on using root
>> in the users chapter.
>> 
>> Modified: 
>> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml
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projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.xml
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>> Modified: 
>> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml
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>> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml
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Sat May 18 23:44:23 2013    (r41666) +++
>> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml
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Sun May 19 00:01:57 2013    (r41667) @@ -302,6 +302,15 @@
>> console none managing requests for hardware devices,
>> peripherals, memory, and CPU time fairly to each user.</para>
>> 
>> +    <para>Much more information about User Accounts is in the 
>> chapter
> 
> It seems odd to capitalize "user accounts" there.
> 
>> +      about <link linkend="users">accounts</link>.  For now you 
>> just +      need to know that each person (user) who uses the 
>> computer should be +      given their own username and password. 
>> The system keeps track +      of the people using the computer 
>> based on this username.  Since +      it is often the case that 
>> several people are working on the same +      project Unix also 
>> provides groups.  Several users can be placed
> 
> Needs a comma after "project".
> 
> Did not look at the rest, maybe later.

Also, the use of "you" is discouraged in the handbook.

Benedict
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