svn commit: r48463 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/makefiles

[Warren Block]

Author: wblock
Date: Wed Mar 23 20:29:17 2016
New Revision: 48463
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48463

Log:
  Edit to simplify and shorten.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/makefiles/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/makefiles/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/makefiles/chapter.xml	Wed Mar 23 20:27:33 2016	(r48462)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/makefiles/chapter.xml	Wed Mar 23 20:29:17 2016	(r48463)
@@ -5116,12 +5116,12 @@ PORTVERSION=	1.0</programlisting>
     <title>Installing Files</title>
 
     <important>
-      <para>The <buildtarget>install</buildtarget> phase is the most
-	important from the end-user's point of view as it is the one
-	adding files to his system.  All the additional commands run
-	in the port's <filename>Makefile</filename> in all the
+      <para>The <buildtarget>install</buildtarget> phase is very
+	important to the end user because it
+	adds files to their system.  All the additional commands run
+	in the port <filename>Makefile</filename>'s
 	<buildtarget>*-install</buildtarget> targets should be
-	echo'ed.  <emphasis>Do not</emphasis> silence them with
+	echoed to the screen.  <emphasis>Do not</emphasis> silence these commands with
 	<literal>@</literal> or <literal>.SILENT</literal>.</para>
     </important>
 
@@ -5140,7 +5140,7 @@ PORTVERSION=	1.0</programlisting>
 	and <literal>@group
 	  <replaceable>group</replaceable></literal>.
 	These operators work until overridden, or until the end
-	of <filename>pkg-plist</filename>, so do not forget to reset
+	of <filename>pkg-plist</filename>, so remember to reset
 	them after they are no longer needed.  The default ownership
 	is <literal>root:wheel</literal>.  See <xref
 	  linkend="plist-keywords-base"/> for more information.</para>