svn commit: r44898 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security
Allan Jude
allanjude at FreeBSD.org
Wed May 21 15:04:32 UTC 2014
Author: allanjude
Date: Wed May 21 15:04:31 2014
New Revision: 44898
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44898
Log:
Fix grammer and remove a comma
Submitted by: dru
Approved by: eadler (mentor)
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml Wed May 21 09:55:55 2014 (r44897)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml Wed May 21 15:04:31 2014 (r44898)
@@ -3384,9 +3384,9 @@ UWWemqWuz3lAZuORQ9KX
<para>The <literal>Corrected</literal> field indicates the
date, time, time offset, and releases that were
corrected. The section in parentheses shows each branch
- to which the fix has been merged, and the version number
+ for which the fix has been merged, and the version number
of the corresponding release from that branch. The
- release identifier itself, includes the version number
+ release identifier itself includes the version number
and, if appropriate, the patch level. The patch level is
the letter <literal>p</literal> followed by a number,
indicating the sequence number of the patch, allowing
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