svn commit: r44653 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall
Dru Lavigne
dru at FreeBSD.org
Thu Apr 24 21:46:37 UTC 2014
Author: dru
Date: Thu Apr 24 21:46:37 2014
New Revision: 44653
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44653
Log:
Fix filesystem and use of "just" and "simply".
Sponsored by: iXsystems
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Thu Apr 24 21:42:26 2014 (r44652)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Thu Apr 24 21:46:37 2014 (r44653)
@@ -530,7 +530,7 @@
<emphasis>not</emphasis> a regular file. It is an
<emphasis>image</emphasis> of the complete contents of
the memory stick. It <emphasis>cannot</emphasis>
- simply be copied like a regular file, but must be
+ be copied like a regular file, but must be
written directly to the target device with
&man.dd.1;:</para>
@@ -780,7 +780,7 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID
<calloutlist>
<callout arearefs="bsdinstall-prompt-single">
- <para>This is the prompt used on systems with just one
+ <para>This is the prompt used on systems with one
CPU.</para>
</callout>
@@ -1384,8 +1384,8 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
</mediaobject>
</figure>
- <para>The entire disk can be allocated to &os;, or just a
- portion of it. If
+ <para>The entire disk or a portion of it can be allocated to &os;.
+ If
<guibutton>[ Entire Disk ]</guibutton> is
chosen, a general partition layout filling the whole disk is
created. Selecting
@@ -1546,7 +1546,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
<listitem>
<para><literal>freebsd-ufs</literal> - A &os; UFS
- filesystem.</para>
+ file system.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -1562,11 +1562,11 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
of the available <acronym>GPT</acronym> partition
types.</para>
- <para>Multiple filesystem partitions can be used, and some
+ <para>Multiple file system partitions can be used, and some
people may prefer a traditional layout with separate
partitions for the <filename>/</filename>,
<filename>/var</filename>, <filename>/tmp</filename>, and
- <filename>/usr</filename> filesystems. See
+ <filename>/usr</filename> file systems. See
<xref linkend="bsdinstall-part-manual-splitfs"/> for an
example.</para>
@@ -1587,7 +1587,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
</tip>
<para>A mountpoint is needed if this partition will contain a
- filesystem. If only a single UFS partition will be created,
+ file system. If only a single UFS partition will be created,
the mountpoint should be <filename>/</filename>.</para>
<para>A <emphasis>label</emphasis> is also requested. A label
@@ -1604,7 +1604,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
in <filename>/dev/</filename>.</para>
<tip>
- <para>Use a unique label on every filesystem to avoid
+ <para>Use a unique label on every file system to avoid
conflicts from identical labels. A few letters from the
computer's name, use, or location can be added to the label.
For instance, <literal>labroot</literal> or
@@ -1613,13 +1613,13 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
</tip>
<example xml:id="bsdinstall-part-manual-splitfs">
- <title>Creating Traditional Split Filesystem
+ <title>Creating Traditional Split File System
Partitions</title>
<para>For a traditional partition layout where the
<filename>/</filename>, <filename>/var</filename>,
<filename>/tmp</filename>, and <filename>/usr</filename>
- directories are separate filesystems on their own
+ directories are separate file systems on their own
partitions, create a GPT partitioning scheme, then create
the partitions as shown. Partition sizes shown are typical
for a 20G target disk. If more space is available on the
@@ -2909,7 +2909,8 @@ login:</screen>
<title>&os; Shutdown</title>
<para>Proper shutdown of a &os; computer helps protect data and
- even hardware from damage. Do not just turn off the power.
+ even hardware from damage. Do not turn off the power before
+ the system has been properly shut down.
If the user is a member of the
<systemitem class="groupname">wheel</systemitem> group, become
the superuser by typing <command>su</command> at the command
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