svn commit: r44652 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall
Dru Lavigne
dru at FreeBSD.org
Thu Apr 24 21:42:27 UTC 2014
Author: dru
Date: Thu Apr 24 21:42:26 2014
New Revision: 44652
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44652
Log:
Fix links.
Sponsored by: iXsystems
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Thu Apr 24 20:50:14 2014 (r44651)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Thu Apr 24 21:42:26 2014 (r44652)
@@ -196,9 +196,8 @@
<title>&os;/&arch.sparc64;</title>
<para>Systems supported by &os;/&arch.sparc64; are listed at
- the <link
- xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/platforms/sparc.html">
- FreeBSD/sparc64</link> Project.</para>
+ the FreeBSD/sparc64 Project (<link
+ xlink:href="&url.base;/platforms/sparc.html">http://www.freebsd.org/platforms/sparc.html</link>).</para>
<para>A dedicated disk is required for &os;/&arch.sparc64;.
It is not possible to share a disk with another operating
@@ -213,9 +212,9 @@
release are listed in the Hardware Notes file. Usually named
<filename>HARDWARE.TXT</filename>, the file is located in the
root directory of the release media. Copies of the supported
- hardware list are also available on the <link
- xlink:href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/index.html">Release
- Information</link> page of the &os; web site.</para>
+ hardware list are also available on the Release Information
+ page of the &os; web site (<link
+ xlink:href="&url.base;/releases/index.html">http://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/index.html</link>).</para>
</sect2>
</sect1>
@@ -272,7 +271,7 @@
inconvenient workarounds like logical partitions.</para>
<warning>
- <para>Some older operating systems like &windows; XP
+ <para>Some older operating systems, like &windows; XP,
are not compatible with the <acronym>GPT</acronym>
partition scheme. If &os; will be sharing a disk with
such an operating system,
@@ -281,9 +280,9 @@
</warning>
<para>&os;'s standard boot loader requires either a primary or
- <acronym>GPT</acronym> partition. (See
+ <acronym>GPT</acronym> partition. Refer to
<xref linkend="boot"/> for more information about the &os;
- booting process.) If all of the primary or
+ booting process. If all of the primary or
<acronym>GPT</acronym> partitions are already in use, one
must be freed for &os;.</para>
@@ -295,12 +294,12 @@
user interface will be used. Third-party application
software requires more space.</para>
- <para>A variety of <link
- xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_disk_partitioning_software">
- free and commercial partition resizing tools</link> are
- available. <link
- xlink:href="http://gparted.sourceforge.net/livecd.php">GParted
- Live</link> is a free Live CD which includes the
+ <para>A variety of free and commercial partition resizing
+ tools are listed at <link
+ xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_disk_partitioning_software">http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_disk_partitioning_software</link>.
+ <application>GParted Live</application> (<link
+ xlink:href="http://gparted.sourceforge.net/livecd.php">http://gparted.sourceforge.net/livecd.php</link>)
+ is a free Live CD which includes the
<application>GParted</application> partition editor.
<application>GParted</application> is also included with
many other Linux Live CD distributions.</para>
@@ -416,18 +415,15 @@
release of &os; is as stable as possible, bugs occasionally
creep into the process. On very rare occasions those bugs
affect the installation process. As these problems are
- discovered and fixed, they are noted in the <link
- xlink:href="&url.base;/releases/&rel.current;R/errata.html">FreeBSD
- Errata</link> on the &os; web site. Check the errata before
+ discovered and fixed, they are noted in the &os; Errata (<link
+ xlink:href="&url.base;/releases/&rel.current;R/errata.html">http://www.freebsd.org/releases/&rel.current;R/errata.html</link>)
+ on the &os; web site. Check the errata before
installing to make sure that there are no problems that might
affect the installation.</para>
<para>Information and errata for all the releases can be found
- on the
- <link xlink:href="&url.base;/releases/index.html">release
- information</link> section of the
- <link xlink:href="&url.base;/index.html">&os; web
- site</link>.</para>
+ on the release information section of the &os; web site (<link
+ xlink:href="&url.base;/releases/index.html">http://www.freebsd.org/releases/index.html</link>).</para>
</sect2>
<sect2 xml:id="bsdinstall-installation-media">
@@ -446,9 +442,9 @@
CD is consequently much smaller, and reduces bandwidth usage
during the install by only downloading required files.</para>
- <para>Copies of &os; installation media are available at the
- <link xlink:href="&url.base;/where.html#download">&os; web
- site</link>. Also download
+ <para>Copies of &os; installation media are available at
+ <link xlink:href="&url.base;/where.html#download">www.freebsd.org/where.html#download</link>.
+ Also download
<filename>CHECKSUM.SHA256</filename> from the same directory
as the image file, and use it to check the image file's
integrity by calculating a <emphasis>checksum</emphasis>.
@@ -661,9 +657,10 @@ commit your changes?</literallayout>
<listitem>
<para>This particular <acronym>BIOS</acronym> does not
- support booting from the desired media. The <link
- xlink:href="http://www.plop.at/en/bootmanager.html">Plop
- Boot Manager</link> can be used to boot older
+ support booting from the desired media. The
+ <application>Plop Boot Manager</application> (<link
+ xlink:href="http://www.plop.at/en/bootmanager.html">http://www.plop.at/en/bootmanager.html</link>)
+ can be used to boot older
computers from CD or USB media.</para>
</listitem>
</orderedlist>
@@ -740,9 +737,9 @@ Loading /boot/defaults/loader.conf
<screen><userinput>boot cd:,\ppc\loader cd:0</userinput></screen>
- <para>For Xserves without keyboards, see <link
- xlink:href="http://support.apple.com/kb/TA26930">&apple;'s
- support web site</link> about booting into Open
+ <para>For Xserves without keyboards, refer to <link
+ xlink:href="http://support.apple.com/kb/TA26930">http://support.apple.com/kb/TA26930</link>
+ about booting into Open
Firmware.</para>
</sect3>
@@ -973,16 +970,16 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
<para>Check the probe results carefully to make sure that &os;
found all the devices. If a device was not
found, it will not be listed. Refer to
- <link linkend="kernelconfig-custom-kernel">Kernel
- modules</link> for instructions on how to add in support for devices
+ <xref linkend="kernelconfig-custom-kernel"/>
+ for instructions on how to add in support for devices
which are not in the <filename>GENERIC</filename>
kernel.</para>
- <para>After the procedure of device probing,
+ <para>After the procedure of device probing, the menu shown in
<xref linkend="bsdinstall-choose-mode"/> will be displayed. The install media
- can be used in three ways: to install &os;, as a
- <link linkend="using-live-cd">live CD</link>, or
- to simply access a &os; shell. Use the arrow keys to choose
+ can be used in three ways: to install &os;, as a live CD as described in
+ <xref linkend="using-live-cd"/>, or
+ to access a &os; shell. Use the arrow keys to choose
an option, and <keycap>Enter</keycap> to select.</para>
<figure xml:id="bsdinstall-choose-mode">
@@ -1010,10 +1007,10 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
<note>
<para>&a.kmoore.email;'s
<application>pc-sysinstall</application> is included with
- <link xlink:href="http://pcbsd.org">PC-BSD</link>, and can
- also be used to <link
- xlink:href="http://wiki.pcbsd.org/index.php/Use_PC-BSD_Installer_to_Install_FreeBSD">
- install &os;</link>. Although sometimes confused with
+ PC-BSD and can
+ be used to install &os; using the instructions at <link
+ xlink:href="http://wiki.pcbsd.org/index.php/Use_PC-BSD_Installer_to_Install_FreeBSD">http://wiki.pcbsd.org/index.php/Use_PC-BSD_Installer_to_Install_FreeBSD</link>.
+ Although sometimes confused with
<application>bsdinstall</application>, the two are not
related.</para>
</note>
@@ -1482,10 +1479,9 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
<tbody>
<row>
<entry>APM</entry>
- <entry><link
- xlink:href="http://support.apple.com/kb/TA21692">Apple
- Partition Map, used by &powerpc;
- &macintosh;.</link></entry>
+ <entry>Apple Partition Map, used by &powerpc;
+ &macintosh; (<link
+ xlink:href="http://support.apple.com/kb/TA21692">http://support.apple.com/kb/TA21692</link>).</entry>
</row>
<row>
@@ -1497,29 +1493,25 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
<row>
<entry>GPT</entry>
- <entry><link
- xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/GUID_Partition_Table">GUID
- Partition Table.</link></entry>
+ <entry>GUID Partition Table (<link
+ xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/GUID_Partition_Table">http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/GUID_Partition_Table</link>).</entry>
</row>
<row>
<entry>MBR</entry>
- <entry><link
- xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Master_boot_record">Master
- Boot Record.</link></entry>
+ <entry>Master Boot Record (<link
+ xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Master_boot_record">http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Master_boot_record</link>).</entry>
</row>
<row>
<entry>PC98</entry>
- <entry><link
- xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pc9801">MBR
- variant, used by NEC PC-98
- computers.</link></entry>
+ <entry>MBR ariant used by NEC PC-98 computers (<link
+ xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pc9801">http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pc9801</link>).</entry>
</row>
<row>
<entry>VTOC8</entry>
- <entry>Volume Table Of Contents, used by Sun SPARC64 and
+ <entry>Volume Table Of Contents used by Sun SPARC64 and
UltraSPARC computers.</entry>
</row>
</tbody>
@@ -1565,7 +1557,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
<para>Another partition type worth noting is
<literal>freebsd-zfs</literal>, used for partitions that will
- contain a &os; <acronym>ZFS</acronym> filesystem. See
+ contain a &os; <acronym>ZFS</acronym> file system.
<xref linkend="filesystems-zfs"/>. &man.gpart.8; shows more
of the available <acronym>GPT</acronym> partition
types.</para>
@@ -1716,8 +1708,9 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
benefit of ensuring that pools created on 512 byte disks will
be able to have 4k sector disks added to them in the future,
for additional storage space, or as replacements for failed
- disks. The installer can also optionally employ <link
- linkend="disks-encrypting-geli">GELI</link> disk encryption.
+ disks. The installer can also optionally employ GELI disk
+ encryption as described in <xref
+ linkend="disks-encrypting-geli"/>.
If encryption is enabled, a 2 GB unencrypted boot pool is
created that contains the <filename>/boot</filename>
directory, which holds the kernel and other files necessary
@@ -1744,8 +1737,8 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
constitute the pool. The automatic <acronym>ZFS</acronym>
installer currently only supports the creation of a single
top level vdev, except in stripe mode. To create more complex
- pools, use <link
- linkend="bsdinstall-part-shell">Shell Mode</link> to create
+ pools, use the instructions in <xref
+ linkend="bsdinstall-part-shell"/> to create
the pool. The installer supports the creation of various
pool types, including stripe (not recommended, no redundancy),
mirror (best performance, least usable space), and RAID-Z 1,
@@ -1953,8 +1946,8 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
<para>Once all requested distribution files have been extracted,
<application>bsdinstall</application> will then drop straight
- into the post-installation configuration tasks (see
- <xref linkend="bsdinstall-post"/>).</para>
+ into the post-installation configuration tasks described in
+ <xref linkend="bsdinstall-post"/>.</para>
</sect1>
<sect1 xml:id="bsdinstall-post">
@@ -2222,7 +2215,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is
<para><acronym>SLAAC</acronym> allows an IPv6 network
component to request autoconfiguration information from a
local router. See <link
- xlink:href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4862">RFC4862</link>
+ xlink:href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4862">http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4862</link>
for more information.</para>
<figure xml:id="bsdinstall-net-ipv6-slaac">
@@ -2956,15 +2949,15 @@ login:</screen>
impossible for probing to be 100% reliable, however, there are
a few things to try if it fails.</para>
- <para>Check the <link
- xlink:href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/index.html">Hardware
- Notes</link> document for the version of &os; to make sure
+ <para>Check the Hardware Notes (<link
+ xlink:href="&url.base;/releases/index.html">http://www.freebsd.org/releases/index.html</link>)
+ document for the version of &os; to make sure
your hardware is supported.</para>
<para>If the hardware is supported and
- lock-ups or other problems occur, build a
- <link linkend="kernelconfig">custom kernel</link> which
- adds support for devices which are not present
+ lock-ups or other problems occur, build a custom kernel using the instructions in
+ <xref linkend="kernelconfig"/> to
+ add support for devices which are not present
in the <filename>GENERIC</filename> kernel. The kernel on the
boot disks is configured assuming that most hardware devices
are in their factory default configuration in terms of IRQs,
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