svn commit: r40403 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq

[Benjamin Kaduk]

On Mon, 17 Dec 2012, Eitan Adler wrote:

> Author: eadler
> Date: Mon Dec 17 16:01:53 2012
> New Revision: 40403
> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40403
>
> Log:
>  Modernize ppp-drop-heavy-load to conform with current defaults.
>
>  Submitted by:	Daniel O'Connor
>  Approved by:	bcr (mentor)
>
> Modified:
>  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
>
> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Mon Dec 17 16:01:51 2012	(r40402)
> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Mon Dec 17 16:01:53 2012	(r40403)
> @@ -7245,13 +7245,12 @@ add 0 0 HISADDR</programlisting>
> 	<answer>
> 	  <para>If you have Link Quality Reporting (LQR) configured, it
> 	    is possible that too many LQR packets are lost between your
> -	    machine and the peer.  The &man.ppp.8; program deduces that
> -	    the line must therefore be bad, and disconnects.  Prior to
> -	    &os; version 2.2.5, LQR was enabled by default.  It is now
> -	    disabled by default.  LQR can be disabled with the following
> -	    line:</para>
> +	    machine and the peer.  &man.ppp.8; deduces that

Hmm, starting a sentence with an entity, somewhat questionable.

Why not "Such packet loss causes &man.ppp.8; to deduce that"?

-Ben Kaduk

> +	    the line must therefore be bad, and disconnects.
> +	    LQR is disabled by default and can be enabled with the
> +	    following line:</para>