[patch] Quick Start Guide to FDP Primer
Warren Block
wblock at wonkity.com
Wed Jan 9 22:14:22 UTC 2013
On Wed, 9 Jan 2013, Dru Lavigne wrote:
> Attached is the svn diff for proposed changes to the Quick Start Guide of the FDP Primer. Igor is mostly happy, except for a few tab indents I can't figure out.
I see a few in the diff. When a tag is opened, the indent level is
increased. In some long tags like ulink, this suprises people:
+ choice of two ports. If you install <filename
+ role="package">textproc/docproj-nojadetex</filename>, you
The start of the second line is still inside the <filename> tag, so it
should be indented:
+ choice of two ports. If you install <filename
+ role="package">textproc/docproj-nojadetex</filename>, you
The closing tag is on the second line, so the indent goes back a level
on the next line (not shown).
> Note that this patch incorporates the information in the Tools section
> into the Overview section. As a new user I got bitten by following the
> Quick Start only to find that it did not mention all of the needed
> tools until the next chapter. Tools was also quite redundant in the
> docproj/jadetex discussion, none of which was mentioned in the earlier
> Quick Start section. If accepted, the svn diff shows the removal of
> Tools.
The patch fails for me on tools/chapter.xml at line 0.
> I tried to include in the Quick Start all of the info I could think of
> to get a new user started and ready to go. The content should be
> reviewed to make sure it isn't missing anything useful or suggests
> something which isn't standard practice.
A quick first glance would make me suggest using igor -R | less -RS.
This shows the color highlights, which most people prefer. The plain
ASCII alternate can be mentioned.
I'll look at it in more depth later.
> Thanks to bcr@ for his patience in getting my head wrapped around indentation.
And thanks to you, also!
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