docs/131568: Cleanup for ipf documentation

[Tom Rhodes]

On Wed, 01 Apr 2009 13:53:17 +0300
Manolis Kiagias <sonic2000gr at gmail.com> wrote:

> Tom Rhodes wrote:
> > The following reply was made to PR docs/131568; it has been noted by GNATS.
> >
> > From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes at FreeBSD.org>
> > To: bug-followup at FreeBSD.org
> > Cc: pepper at cbio.mskcc.org
> > Subject: Re: docs/131568: Cleanup for ipf documentation
> > Date: Wed, 1 Apr 2009 04:12:42 -0400
> >
> >  Hi Chris,
> >  
> >  I'm trying to compare your fixed version to the current one.  Could
> >  you perhaps generate a unified diff against the SGML files?  It
> >  would be much easier for us to parse.  Thanks!
> >  
> >  BTW: The primer can be found at this URL:
> >  http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/index.html
> >  
> >  -- 
> >  Tom Rhodes
> >   
> 
> I am also in the process of finishing (hopefully) a long patch for the
> 'firewalls' chapter that attempts to fix some of these inconsistencies
> (and many others). While it is not exactly at review state yet,  here is
> what I got right now:
> 
> http://people.freebsd.org/~manolis/firewalls.diff
> 
> (this is still changing, but  comments are welcome nonetheless)
> 
> and a build is here:
> 
> http://www.freebsdgr.org/handbook-mine/firewalls.html
> 
> I originally missed this PR,  but I could have a look at the submitted
> text and integrate it with this patch, if appropriate.

Better late than never.  So I took a quick glance a this and
found it to be pretty nice.  I'll gladly give it a review when
you feel it's ready to be committed.  Thanks!

-- 
Tom Rhodes