A patch for the 'geom' chapter

[Giorgos Keramidas]

On Mon, 24 Nov 2008 13:51:07 -0500, Tom Rhodes <trhodes at FreeBSD.org> wrote:
> On Mon, 24 Nov 2008 19:36:07 +0200
> Manolis Kiagias <sonic2000gr at gmail.com> wrote:
>> http://people.freebsd.org/~manolis/geom.txt

> This looks pretty good actually.  I would probably change the
> following:
>
> +      <example>
> +	<title>Labeling Your Boot Disk's Partitions</title>
>
> to:
>
> <title>Labeling Partitions on the Boot Disk</title>
>
> And there are a lot of "You" references.  I've tried to write this
> without invoking the user as much as possible and may make reading the
> entire chapter difficult.  I would prefer we not talk to the user
> though.

I am not sure if I will have the time to read the full patch tonight,
but Tom is quite right about avoiding "you" when possible.