RFR: A "Boot Time Splash Screens" Section to the Handbook

Manolis Kiagias sonic2000gr at gmail.com
Tue Dec 2 20:46:32 UTC 2008


Gabor PALI wrote:
>   
>> Hope that helps.
>>     
>
> Of course!  Thank you again.
>
>
> Here is the next iteration:
>
> (patch version):
> http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2008/12/02/splash.screen.section.patch.diff
>
> (HTML version):
> http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2008/12/02/html/boot-blocks.html#BOOT-SPLASH
>
>
> Regards,
> :g
>
>   

I like the improvements too :)
If I were to make a few changes (at the edge of these being doc-bikesheds):

- Maybe find another way to describe the console login rather than
"legacy virtual console login prompt". Although this may be very
accurate I think it can be shortened sowewhat and still carry the same
meaning. Esp. since it is mentioned a few times.
- The word intensity is mentioned three times in a row "cycle through
steps of changing intensity of the image, from bright intensity to a
very dark intensity and over again." => I would probably change this to
"cycle through steps of changing intensity of the image, from bright to
very dark and over again."

This is minor stuff of course, and as I said it might just be my own color.

(off to find a nice boot screen for my Aspire one :) )

manolis@




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