Reordering the rc.conf manual page
Tom Rhodes
trhodes at FreeBSD.org
Thu Sep 15 23:24:13 UTC 2005
On Thu, 15 Sep 2005 08:15:13 -0700
garys at opusnet.com (Gary W. Swearingen) wrote:
> Tom Rhodes <trhodes at FreeBSD.org> writes:
>
> > I've included a patch. It causes a few "empty line" warnings,
> > but still gives you the general idea. Comments and suggestions
> > are very welcome.
>
> I got no change to my file after these messages:
> Patching file rc.conf.5 using Plan A...
> Hunk #1 succeeded at 49.
> Hunk #2 succeeded at 73.
> patch: **** malformed patch at line 261: script files -into
> individual filenames.
>
> > ===================================================================
> > RCS file: /home/ncvs/src/share/man/man5/rc.conf.5,v
> > Instead, it is included by the
> > various generic startup scripts in
>
> rm "generic".
>
> > -.Pa /etc
> > +.Pa /etc/rc.d
> > which conditionalize their
>
> rm "alize". Please.
>
> > internal actions according to the settings found there.
>
> Found where? "settings found there" -> "variables set in rc.conf".
>
> > .Nm
> > -file:
> > +file, classified by section.
>
> If you think it's worth your time. IMO, it won't help users
> much, but it WILL make it look more organized -- a good thing.
Yes, I want more organized. It will help me, and perhaps
others, if they are looking for a specific option. They can
just scroll quick down to the area it should be listed in.
>
> > +When an configuration variable exists which may fit into
>
> "an" > "a"
>
> > +two or more catagories, it will be listed with those which
>
> spelling
>
> > +contain the most likeness.
>
> That sounds like some will be listed in muliple categories.
> I hope that's not true.
Correct, there will only be one listing of every item.
>
> > +.Ss DEBUG
> > +Configuration variables which enable or disable debugging
> > +messages or controls are defined below:
>
> I don't like "are defined below:". Redundant or something.
> Maybe "are defined below." or "are:"
>
> Whoops; maybe that's not yours. Oh well.
>
Yea, much of this text is not originally mine. :)
--
Tom Rhodes
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