docs/90755: remove "on 5.x" from ATM setup in advanced-networking

[Rene Ladan]

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>>Number:         90755
>>Category:       docs
>>Synopsis:       remove "on 5.x" from ATM setup in advanced-networking
>>Confidential:   no
>>Severity:       non-critical
>>Priority:       low
>>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>>State:          open
>>Quarter:        
>>Keywords:       
>>Date-Required:
>>Class:          doc-bug
>>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>>Arrival-Date:   Wed Dec 21 19:00:20 GMT 2005
>>Closed-Date:
>>Last-Modified:
>>Originator:     Rene Ladan
>>Release:        
>>Organization:
>>Environment:
>>Description:
> 
> The synopsis of the Advanced Networking chapter of the FreeBSD handbook mentions a.o.:
> 
> 	<para>How to configure ATM under &os; 5.X.</para>
> 
>>From the latest commit (1.369 -> 1.370) :
> 
> --- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml	2005/12/18 00:41:10	1.369
> +++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml	2005/12/19 11:59:38	1.370
> @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
>  
>  <chapter id="advanced-networking">
> @@ -4048,7 +4048,7 @@ gif0: flags=8010<POINTOPOINT,MULTICAS
>        </authorgroup>
>      </sect1info>
>  
> -    <title>Asynchronous Transfer Mode (ATM) on &os; 5.X</title>
> +    <title>Asynchronous Transfer Mode (ATM)</title>
>  
>      <sect2>
>        <title>Configuring classical IP over ATM (PVCs)</title>
> 
> So mentioning 5.X in the above <para/> is not necessary.
> 
>>How-To-Repeat:
> 
>               
> 
>>Fix:
> 
> --- chapter-orig.sgml	Wed Dec 21 09:57:48 2005
> +++ chapter.sgml	Wed Dec 21 19:44:54 2005
> @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
>        </listitem>
>  
>        <listitem>
> -	<para>How to configure ATM under &os; 5.X.</para>
> +	<para>How to configure ATM.</para>
>        </listitem>
>      </itemizedlist>
>  
> 
>>Release-Note:
>>Audit-Trail:
>>Unformatted:
> 
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