docs/90755: remove "on 5.x" from ATM setup in advanced-networking

Rene Ladan r..c.ladan at student.tue.nl
Wed Dec 21 19:00:24 UTC 2005


>Number:         90755
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       remove "on 5.x" from ATM setup in advanced-networking
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed Dec 21 19:00:20 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Rene Ladan
>Release:        
>Organization:
>Environment:
>Description:
The synopsis of the Advanced Networking chapter of the FreeBSD handbook mentions a.o.:

	<para>How to configure ATM under &os; 5.X.</para>

>From the latest commit (1.369 -> 1.370) :

--- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml	2005/12/18 00:41:10	1.369
+++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml	2005/12/19 11:59:38	1.370
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 
 <chapter id="advanced-networking">
@@ -4048,7 +4048,7 @@ gif0: flags=8010<POINTOPOINT,MULTICAS
       </authorgroup>
     </sect1info>
 
-    <title>Asynchronous Transfer Mode (ATM) on &os; 5.X</title>
+    <title>Asynchronous Transfer Mode (ATM)</title>
 
     <sect2>
       <title>Configuring classical IP over ATM (PVCs)</title>

So mentioning 5.X in the above <para/> is not necessary.
>How-To-Repeat:
              
>Fix:
--- chapter-orig.sgml	Wed Dec 21 09:57:48 2005
+++ chapter.sgml	Wed Dec 21 19:44:54 2005
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>How to configure ATM under &os; 5.X.</para>
+	<para>How to configure ATM.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
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