CFD: additions to the PR submission article
Simon L. Nielsen
simon at nitro.dk
Tue Apr 12 18:38:22 UTC 2005
On 2005.04.11 04:40:42 -0500, Mark Linimon wrote:
> On Mon, 11 Apr 2005, Simon L. Nielsen wrote:
>
> > > + </listitem>
> > > +
> >
> > No need for an empty line here.
>
> Hmm, then the style is wrong elsewhere in the article.
That sounds likely. It's not very important, I just notice things
like that when I read a patch :-).
> > > + <para>Then you should ascertain whether or not the problem is
> > > + timely. There are few things
> >
> > This line could be made longer.
>
> Weak attempt at a diff reduction on the next line. OTOH since I
> moved the block that that line was in to make the emphasis clearer,
> it may not make any difference.
When the text is moved I don't think it it helps much to preserve old
lines, but I don't know if it makes a difference for translators.
> > > + <ulink url="http://www.freebsd.org/security/">list of supported
> >
> > s/freebsd.org/FreeBSD.org/
>
> Also wrong elsewhere IIRC.
>
> I can make these suggested changes when I commit, and then go back and
> fix the other ones in a separate checkin to make them consistent.
That would be great!
--
Simon L. Nielsen
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