CFD: additions to the PR submission article
Mark Linimon
linimon at lonesome.com
Mon Apr 11 09:40:43 UTC 2005
On Mon, 11 Apr 2005, Simon L. Nielsen wrote:
> > + </listitem>
> > +
>
> No need for an empty line here.
Hmm, then the style is wrong elsewhere in the article.
> > + <para>Then you should ascertain whether or not the problem is
> > + timely. There are few things
>
> This line could be made longer.
Weak attempt at a diff reduction on the next line. OTOH since I
moved the block that that line was in to make the emphasis clearer,
it may not make any difference.
> > + <ulink url="http://www.freebsd.org/security/">list of supported
>
> s/freebsd.org/FreeBSD.org/
Also wrong elsewhere IIRC.
I can make these suggested changes when I commit, and then go back and
fix the other ones in a separate checkin to make them consistent.
mcl
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