A problem in Handbook's Common Tasks part
Giorgos Keramidas
keramida at ceid.upatras.gr
Fri Jul 30 08:08:54 UTC 2004
On 2004-07-30 08:20, Marc Fonvieille <marc at blackend.org> wrote:
>
> I found something "annoying" in the introduction of the Common Tasks
> part, I read:
>
> "Describe the X Window System in more detail, and introduce you to
> modern desktop environments such as GNOME and KDE."
>
> The X Window System, GNOME and KDE are described in X11 chapter of
> the previous part "Getting Started". Since this sentence seems refering
> to the desktop chapter, I'd see something like:
>
> "Introduce you to popular and usesul desktop applications: browsers,
> productivity tools, document viewers, etc."
Yep, this one seems much better.
Good catch!
:-)
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