A problem in Handbook's Common Tasks part
Marc Fonvieille
marc at blackend.org
Fri Jul 30 06:20:42 UTC 2004
Hello,
I found something "annoying" in the introduction of the Common Tasks
part, I read:
"Describe the X Window System in more detail, and introduce you to
modern desktop environments such as GNOME and KDE."
The X Window System, GNOME and KDE are described in X11 chapter of
the previous part "Getting Started". Since this sentence seems refering
to the desktop chapter, I'd see something like:
"Introduce you to popular and usesul desktop applications: browsers,
productivity tools, document viewers, etc."
instead of the current sentence.
Well someone should be able to find a better text than mine :)
Marc
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