svn commit: r318468 - in stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1: hardware readme

[Glen Barber]

On Thu, May 18, 2017 at 10:43:28AM -0600, Adam Weinberger wrote:
> > On 18 May, 2017, at 10:24, Glen Barber <gjb at FreeBSD.org> wrote:
> > 
> > Author: gjb
> > Date: Thu May 18 16:24:11 2017
> > New Revision: 318468
> > URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/318468
> > 
> > Log:
> >  Fix grammar nits.
> > 
> >  Sponsored by:	The FreeBSD Foundation
> > 
> > Modified:
> >  stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml
> >  stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml
> > 
> > Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml
> > ==============================================================================
> > --- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml	Thu May 18 16:24:10 2017	(r318467)
> > +++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml	Thu May 18 16:24:11 2017	(r318468)
> > @@ -555,7 +555,7 @@
> >       </itemizedlist>
> > 
> >       <para>The following Sun &ultrasparc; systems are not tested but
> > -	believed to be also supported by &os;:</para>
> > +	believed to also be supported by &os;:</para>
> 
> As long as we're picking grammar nits, you've split an infinitive there. I think you want "believed also to be supported" or "believed to be supported by &os; as well:".
> 

I like the wording from your second suggestion better anyway.

Thanks.

Glen

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