svn commit: r318468 - in stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1: hardware readme

[Adam Weinberger]

> On 18 May, 2017, at 10:24, Glen Barber <gjb at FreeBSD.org> wrote:
> 
> Author: gjb
> Date: Thu May 18 16:24:11 2017
> New Revision: 318468
> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/318468
> 
> Log:
>  Fix grammar nits.
> 
>  Sponsored by:	The FreeBSD Foundation
> 
> Modified:
>  stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml
>  stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml
> 
> Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml	Thu May 18 16:24:10 2017	(r318467)
> +++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml	Thu May 18 16:24:11 2017	(r318468)
> @@ -555,7 +555,7 @@
>       </itemizedlist>
> 
>       <para>The following Sun &ultrasparc; systems are not tested but
> -	believed to be also supported by &os;:</para>
> +	believed to also be supported by &os;:</para>

As long as we're picking grammar nits, you've split an infinitive there. I think you want "believed also to be supported" or "believed to be supported by &os; as well:".

> 
>       <itemizedlist>
> 	<listitem>
> @@ -581,7 +581,7 @@
>       </itemizedlist>
> 
>       <para>The following Fujitsu &primepower; systems are not tested
> -	but believed to be also supported by &os;:</para>
> +	but believed to also be supported by &os;:</para>

Same here.

# Adam


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