svn commit: r323765 - releng/10.4/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes

[Glen Barber]

Author: gjb
Date: Tue Sep 19 15:39:47 2017
New Revision: 323765
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/323765

Log:
  Wordsmith entries for r318430 and r313433 for clarification.
  
  Submitted by:	rpokala
  Approved by:	re (implicit)
  Sponsored by:	The FreeBSD Foundation

Modified:
  releng/10.4/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml

Modified: releng/10.4/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- releng/10.4/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml	Tue Sep 19 15:08:31 2017	(r323764)
+++ releng/10.4/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml	Tue Sep 19 15:39:47 2017	(r323765)
@@ -199,8 +199,8 @@
 	facilities of &man.cxgbe.4; devices.</para>
 
       <para revision="318430">The &man.ifconfig.8; utility has been
-	updated to persistently store the hardware
-	<acronym>MAC</acronym> addres of an interface.  This provides
+	updated to show <acronym>MAC</acronym> addresses
+	persistently stored by network drivers.  This provides
 	a mechanism through which the original <acronym>MAC</acronym>
 	address can be retrieved if, for example, an interface is
 	added to a &man.lagg.4; and the <literal>MAC</literal> is
@@ -285,7 +285,7 @@
 
       <para revision="313433">The &man.bsdinstall.8; utility has been
 	updated to ensure newly-created partitions are properly
-	aligned at 4096k boundaries.</para>
+	aligned at 4096 byte boundaries.</para>
 
       <para revision="321202" contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ff;">The
 	default <acronym>EFI</acronym> partition created by