svn commit: r267707 - releng/9.3/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes

[Glen Barber]

Author: gjb
Date: Sat Jun 21 23:35:11 2014
New Revision: 267707
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/267707

Log:
  Reword the compatibility note regarding earlier versions of
  FreeBSD prior to 9.0.
  
  Submitted by:	wblock
  Approved by:	re (implicit)
  Sponsored by:	The FreeBSD Foundation

Modified:
  releng/9.3/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml

Modified: releng/9.3/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- releng/9.3/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml	Sat Jun 21 19:29:40 2014	(r267706)
+++ releng/9.3/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml	Sat Jun 21 23:35:11 2014	(r267707)
@@ -759,10 +759,10 @@
       <title xml:id="upgrade-pitfalls">User-Visible
 	Incompatibilities</title>
 
-      <para>&os; 9.0 and later have several incompatibilities in
-	system configuration which you might want to know before
-	upgrading your system.  <emphasis>Please read this section and
-	  the <link
+      <para>&os; 9.0 and later versions have several
+	configuration incompatibilities with earlier versions of &os;.
+	These differences are best understood before upgrading.
+	<emphasis>Please read this section and the <link
 	    xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/releases/9.0R/relnotes-detailed.html#UPGRADE">Upgrading
 	    Section in 9.0-RELEASE Release Notes</link> carefully
 	  before submitting a problem report and/or posting a question