svn commit: r260615 - releng/10.0/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes
Glen Barber
gjb at FreeBSD.org
Tue Jan 14 00:25:46 UTC 2014
Author: gjb
Date: Tue Jan 14 00:25:46 2014
New Revision: 260615
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/260615
Log:
Fix various release notes nits.
Submitted by: dt71 at gmx.com (via -doc@)
Approved by: re (implicit)
Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation
Modified:
releng/10.0/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
Modified: releng/10.0/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- releng/10.0/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Mon Jan 13 23:48:01 2014 (r260614)
+++ releng/10.0/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Tue Jan 14 00:25:46 2014 (r260615)
@@ -18,6 +18,7 @@
<!ENTITY man.vmx.4 "<citerefentry xmlns='http://docbook.org/ns/docbook'><refentrytitle>vmx</refentrytitle><manvolnum>4</manvolnum></citerefentry>">
<!ENTITY man.pkg.7 "<citerefentry xmlns='http://docbook.org/ns/docbook'><refentrytitle>pkg</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum></citerefentry>">
<!ENTITY man.bhyve.8 "<citerefentry xmlns='http://docbook.org/ns/docbook'><refentrytitle>bhyve</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>">
+<!ENTITY man.gptboot.8 "<citerefentry xmlns='http://docbook.org/ns/docbook'><refentrytitle>gptboot</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>">
<!ENTITY man.bsdconfig.8 "<citerefentry xmlns='http://docbook.org/ns/docbook'><refentrytitle>bsdconfig</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>">
<!ENTITY man.unbound.8 "<citerefentry xmlns='http://docbook.org/ns/docbook'><refentrytitle>unbound</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>">
]>
@@ -202,7 +203,7 @@
<para arch="amd64,i386" revision="240135">Support was added for
the new Intel on-CPU Bull Mountain random number
generator, found on IvyBridge and supposedly later CPUs,
- accessible with RDRAND instruction.</para>
+ accessible with the RDRAND instruction.</para>
<sect3 xml:id="kernel-virtualization">
<title>Virtualization support</title>
@@ -229,7 +230,7 @@ hv_netsvc_load="YES"
hv_utils_load="YES"
hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Alternatively, the Hyper-V drivers can be added to the i386
kernel by adding <literal>device hyperv</literal> to the kernel config, and then
- recompiling the kernel. Please refer to:
+ recompiling the kernel. Please refer to
<link xlink:href="http://wiki.freebsd.org/HyperV">FreeBSD and Microsoft Windows Server Hyper-V support</link>
for full instructions on how to set up Hyper-V support under FreeBSD.</para>
@@ -247,7 +248,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al
<para revision="239922">Raspberry PI support has been added.
Refer to these <link xlink:href="http://kernelnomicon.org/?p=164">setup instructions</link>
- and <link xlink:href="http://www.raspberrypi.org/quick-start-guide">quick start
+ and this <link xlink:href="http://www.raspberrypi.org/quick-start-guide">quick start
guide</link>.</para>
<para revision="253396">The default ABI on ARM is now the ARM EABI. This brings a number of
@@ -256,15 +257,15 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al
<para revision="239268">ARM support has been greatly improved, including support
for ARMv6 and ARMv7, SMP and thread-local storage (TLS).
Additionally support for some newer SoC like the MV78x60 and OMAP4 was added.
- See <link xlink:href="http://lists.freebsd.org/pipermail/freebsd-arm/2012-August/003757.html">this announcement</link>
+ See the <link xlink:href="http://lists.freebsd.org/pipermail/freebsd-arm/2012-August/003757.html">announcement</link>
for further details.</para>
<para revision="254918">Superpages support on ARM has been added. Superpages support
provides improved performance and scalability by allowing TLB
translations to dynamically cover large physical memory regions.
All ARMv6 and ARMv7-based platforms can take advantage of this feature.
- See <link xlink:href="https://wiki.freebsd.org/ARMSuperpages">this page</link>
- for further details.</para>
+ See the <link xlink:href="https://wiki.freebsd.org/ARMSuperpages">ARM Superpages status</link>
+ page for further details.</para>
</sect3>
@@ -276,10 +277,10 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al
mode. This change makes it possible to boot &os; from USB
devices.</para>
- <para arch="amd64,i386" role="merged">A new gptboot boot loader has
+ <para arch="amd64,i386" role="merged">A new &man.gptboot.8; boot loader has
been added to support booting from a GPT labeled disk. A
new <command>boot</command> command has been added to
- &man.gpt.8;, which makes a GPT disk bootable by writing the
+ &man.gpart.8;, which makes a GPT disk bootable by writing the
required bits of the boot loader, creating a new boot
partition if required.</para>
@@ -291,7 +292,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al
<para role="merged">The &man.cmx.4; driver, a driver for Omnikey CardMan 4040
PCMCIA smartcard readers, has been added.</para>
- <para>The &man.syscons.4; driver now supports Colemak keyboard layout.</para>
+ <para>The &man.syscons.4; driver now supports the Colemak keyboard layout.</para>
<para role="merged">The &man.uslcom.4; driver, a driver for Silicon
Laboratories CP2101/CP2102-based USB serial adapters, has been
@@ -380,13 +381,13 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al
address on the subnet (carpdev), switching state with
&man.ifconfig.8;, better locking and using modern kernel
interfaces to allocate multicast memberships.
- Configuration of the CARP protocol via &man.ifconfig.8; has changed, as well as format
- of CARP events submitted to &man.devd.8; has changed. See &man.carp.4;
+ Configuration of the CARP protocol via &man.ifconfig.8; has changed, as well as the format
+ of CARP events submitted to &man.devd.8;. See &man.carp.4;
for more information. The arpbalance feature of &man.carp.4; is currently
not supported anymore.</para>
<para revision="240233">The &man.pf.4; firewall now supports fine-grain locking
- and better utilization on multi-cpu machines resulting in
+ and better utilization on multi-CPU machines, resulting in
significant improvements in performance.</para>
<para revision="250700">Support for up to 65536 routing tables has been
@@ -417,7 +418,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al
<para revision="240616">&man.nvme.4; has been added and provides NVM Express support.
NVM Express is an optimized register interface, command set and feature set of
PCI Express (PCIe)-based Solid-State Drives (SSDs). For more information,
- see <link xlink:href="http://http://www.nvmexpress.org/">nvmexpress.org</link>.</para>
+ see <link xlink:href="http://www.nvmexpress.org/">nvmexpress.org</link>.</para>
</sect3>
@@ -449,7 +450,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al
<para revision="240868">TRIM support has been added for
ZFS.</para>
- <para revision="246586">Support for the high performance LZ4 compression algorithm
+ <para revision="246586">Support for the high-performance LZ4 compression algorithm
has been added to ZFS. LZ4 is usually faster and can achieve a
higher compression ratio than LZJB, the default compression
algorithm.</para>
@@ -458,13 +459,11 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al
<para revision="243524">The zio nop-write improvement from Illumos
was imported into &os;. To reduce I/O, nop-write skips overwriting
- data if the checksum (cryptographically secure) of new data
+ data if the (cryptographically secure) checksum of new data
matches the checksum of existing data. It also saves space if
- snapshots are in use. This improvement only works only on
+ snapshots are in use. This improvement only works on
datasets with enabled compression, disabled deduplication and
- sha256 checksums.</para>
-
- <para>ZFS will now compare the checksums of incoming writes to
+ sha256 checksums. ZFS will now compare the checksums of incoming writes to
the checksum of the existing on-disk data and avoid issuing any
write I/O for data that has not changed. This will reduce I/O
as well as space usage because if the old block is referenced
@@ -481,7 +480,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al
<title>Userland Changes</title>
<para revision="255321">On platforms where &man.clang.1; is the default
- system compiler, (such as i386, amd64, arm) GCC and GNU libstdc++ are no
+ system compiler (such as i386, amd64, arm), GCC and GNU libstdc++ are no
longer built by default. &man.clang.1; and libc++ from LLVM are used on
these platforms by instead. GCC 4.2.1 and libstdc++ are still built
and used by default on pc98 and all other platforms where &man.clang.1;
@@ -491,10 +490,10 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al
<para revision="251662">&man.clang.1; and llvm have been updated to
version 3.3 release. Please refer to
<link xlink:href="http://llvm.org/releases/3.3/tools/clang/docs/ReleaseNotes.html">
- Clang 3.3 Release Notes.</link></para>
+ Clang 3.3 Release Notes</link>.</para>
<para role="merged" revision="255949">BIND has been replaced by &man.unbound.8; for
- local dns resolution in the base system. With this change, nslookup
+ local DNS resolution in the base system. With this change, nslookup
and dig are no longer a part of the base system. Users should
instead use &man.host.1; and &man.drill.1; Alternatively,
nslookup and dig can be obtained by installing the
@@ -520,17 +519,17 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al
This brings bison compatibilities to &man.yacc.1; while preserving full
backwards compatibility with previous version of &man.yacc.1;.</para>
- <para revision="250881">&man.lex.1; has been replaced by flex 2.5.37</para>
+ <para revision="250881">&man.lex.1; has been replaced by flex 2.5.37.</para>
<para revision="250699">&man.make.1; has been replaced with the
- "Portable" BSD make tool (bmake) from NetBSD.</para>
+ <quote>Portable</quote> BSD make tool (bmake) from NetBSD.</para>
<para role="merged">The &man.adduser.8; utility now supports
a <option>-M</option> option to set the mode of a new user's
home directory.</para>
<para>BSD-licensed versions of &man.ar.1; and &man.ranlib.1;,
- based on <filename>libarchive</filename>, have replaced the GNU
+ based on &man.libarchive.3;, have replaced the GNU
Binutils versions of these utilities.</para>
<para>BSD-licensed versions of &man.bc.1; and &man.dc.1; have
@@ -546,7 +545,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al
specifying the <option>-RrP</option> flags.</para>
<para>BSD-licensed version of &man.cpio.1; based on
- <filename>libarchive</filename>, has replaced the GNU cpio.
+ &man.libarchive.3;, has replaced the GNU cpio.
Note that the GNU cpio is still installed as
<filename>gcpio</filename>.</para>
@@ -558,7 +557,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al
<para>The &man.fdopendir.3; library function has been added.</para>
- <para role="merged">The &man.fetch.3; library now support HTTP 1.1
+ <para role="merged">The &man.fetch.3; library now supports HTTP 1.1
If-Modified-Since behavior. The &man.fetch.1; program now
supports <option>-i <replaceable>filename</replaceable></option>
which will only download the specified HTTP URL if the content
@@ -596,7 +595,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al
<para>&man.sh.1; has many bug fixes, some new features, and will now
refuse to parse some invalid scripts. Additionally, it now
- has filename completion and defaults to the "emacs" editing
+ has filename completion and defaults to the <quote>emacs</quote> editing
mode.</para>
<para>The &man.split.1; utility now supports a <option>-n</option>
@@ -610,7 +609,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al
<option>--numeric-owner</option> flag to ignore user/group names
on create and extract.</para>
- <para>The &man.tar.1; utility now supports an
+ <para>The &man.tar.1; utility now supports the
<option>-S</option> flag to sparsify files on extraction.</para>
<para>The &man.tar.1; utility now supports a <option>-s</option>
@@ -625,7 +624,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al
<para>&man.top.1; now supports a <option>-P</option> flag to
provide per-CPU usage statistics.</para>
- <para>&man.zdump.8; is now working properly on 64 bit architectures.
+ <para>&man.zdump.8; is now working properly on 64-bit architectures.
</para>
<para>&man.traceroute.8; now has the ability to print the AS
@@ -747,18 +746,18 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al
<para role="merged"><application>AMD</application> has been updated from 6.0.10
to 6.1.5.</para>
- <para role="merged"><application>awk</application> has been updated from 1 May
+ <para role="merged"><application>awk</application> has been updated from the 1 May
2007 release to the 23 October 2007 release.</para>
<para role="merged"><application>bzip2</application> has been updated from 1.0.4
to 1.0.5.</para>
<para revision="251794"><application>CVS</application> has been removed from the
- base system, but is still available from ports.</para>
+ base system, but is still available from Ports Collection.</para>
<para revision="251886">Subversion has been imported into the base system and
is installed as <application>svnlite</application>. <application>svnlite</application>
- should only be used for checking out &os; source and committing, and does not
+ should only be used for checking out the &os; source trees and committing, and does not
replace the full Subversion port.</para>
<para revision="234449"><application>file</application> has been updated to 5.11.</para>
@@ -771,7 +770,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al
<para revision="250592"><application>less</application> has been updated to
v458.</para>
- <para><application>ncurses</application> has been updated from
+ <para><application>ncurses</application> has been updated
to 5.7-20081102.</para>
<para role="merged"><application>OpenSSH</application> has been updated
@@ -791,7 +790,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al
have been updated from the <application>tzcode2004a</application>
release to the <application>tzcode2009h</application> release.
If you have upgraded from source or via the &man.freebsd-update.8;,
- then please run &man.tzsetup.8; to install a new /etc/localtime.
+ then please run &man.tzsetup.8; to install a new <filename>/etc/localtime</filename>.
</para>
<para revision="252726"><application>WPA Supplicant</application> has been
@@ -802,7 +801,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al
<para revision="258231" role="merged">&man.nvi.1; has been updated to 2.1.2.</para>
- <para revision="254225">&man.nvi.1; supports wide character locales.</para>
+ <para revision="254225">&man.nvi.1; supports wide-character locales.</para>
</sect2>
@@ -812,7 +811,7 @@ hv_vmbus_load="YES"</programlisting> Al
<para revision="257444">The pkg_add, pkg_create, pkg_delete, pkg_info,
pkg_updating, and pkg_version utilities have been removed.
&man.pkg.7; must now be used to install binary packages. &man.pkg.7;
- is the next generation &os; package manager, also referred to as "pkgng".</para>
+ is the next generation &os; package manager, also referred to as <quote>pkgng</quote>.</para>
</sect2>
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