svn commit: r314585 - head/usr.sbin/syslogd

[Hiroki Sato]

"Ngie Cooper (yaneurabeya)" <yaneurabeya at gmail.com> wrote
  in <1A3F6606-822C-4C80-ADFA-48378F0F29EE at gmail.com>:

ya> >> How about "...accepts UDP packets sent with any source port" or
ya> >> something?
ya> > 
ya> > Yeah, that’s more accurate.
ya> 
ya> How about this?
ya> -Ngie
ya> 
ya> $ svn diff usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8
ya> Index: usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8
ya> ===================================================================
ya> --- usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8  (revision 314585)
ya> +++ usr.sbin/syslogd/syslogd.8  (working copy)
ya> @@ -131,7 +131,7 @@
ya>  .Ar service
ya>  of
ya>  .Ql \&*
ya> -allows packets to be received from any UDP port.
ya> +allows UDP packets to be sent with any source port.
ya>  The default
ya>  .Ar service
ya>  is

 Looks good to me though probably I am not the best person who can
 judge an English expression as good or bad...

-- Hiroki
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