svn commit: r363598 - head/usr.sbin/nologin

[Mateusz Piotrowski]

Hi!

On 7/27/20 6:41 PM, Rodney W. Grimes wrote:
>> Author: 0mp (doc,ports committer)
>> Date: Mon Jul 27 10:45:47 2020
>> New Revision: 363598
>> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/363598
>>
>> Log:
>>    nologin.8: Improve wording
> I disagree that this improves wording.  The norm of action for
> "logging" in Unix is to "write to syslog", not "log to syslog".

Hmm, I agree, but here it is "log using syslog".

Have you got any idea how to further improve this sentence?

>>    Reported by:	yuripv
>>    Reviewed by:	bcr, yuripv
>>    MFC after:	3 days
>>    Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D25814
>>
>> Modified:
>>    head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8
>>
>> Modified: head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8
>> ==============================================================================
>> --- head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8	Mon Jul 27 09:10:02 2020	(r363597)
>> +++ head/usr.sbin/nologin/nologin.8	Mon Jul 27 10:45:47 2020	(r363598)
>> @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ have been disabled.
>>   .Pp
>>   When executed,
>>   .Nm
>> -first writes about the login attempt to
>> +first logs about the login attempt using
>>   .Xr syslog 3
>>   and then displays a message that an account is not available.
>>   .Pp

Cheers!

Mateusz Piotrowski