svn commit: r271042 - stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes

[Glen Barber]

Author: gjb
Date: Wed Sep  3 16:48:33 2014
New Revision: 271042
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/271042

Log:
  Minor rewording to the r260387 entry.
  
  Sponsored by:	The FreeBSD Foundation

Modified:
  stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml

Modified: stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml	Wed Sep  3 16:46:45 2014	(r271041)
+++ stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml	Wed Sep  3 16:48:33 2014	(r271042)
@@ -601,9 +601,9 @@
 
 	<para revision="260387" contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ix;">The
 	  &man.cam.4; subsystem has been updated to support
-	  finer-grained locking, direct dispatch and multi-queue.
-	  Combined with &man.geom.4; direct dispatch that allows to
-	  reduce lock congestion and improve <acronym>SMP</acronym>
+	  finer-grained locking, direct dispatch and multi-queue,
+	  which combined with &man.geom.4; direct dispatch, reduces
+	  lock congestion and improves <acronym>SMP</acronym>
 	  scalability of the SCSI/ATA stack.</para>
 
 	<para revision="260478">The &man.geom.8;