svn commit: r270685 - stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme

Glen Barber gjb at FreeBSD.org
Tue Aug 26 23:58:54 UTC 2014


Author: gjb
Date: Tue Aug 26 23:58:54 2014
New Revision: 270685
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/270685

Log:
  Fix the stable/10 hardware/article.xml to conform to
  FDP style conventions.
  Fix a few rendering issues, while here.
  
  Sponsored by:	The FreeBSD Foundation

Modified:
  stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml

Modified: stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml	Tue Aug 26 23:51:01 2014	(r270684)
+++ stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml	Tue Aug 26 23:58:54 2014	(r270685)
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
 <!DOCTYPE article PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//DTD DocBook XML V5.0-Based Extension//EN"
-        "../../../share/xml/freebsd50.dtd" [
+  "../../../share/xml/freebsd50.dtd" [
 <!ENTITY % release PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//ENTITIES Release Specification//EN" "release.ent">
  %release;
 ]>
-<!-- 
+<!--
      Local Variables:
      mode: sgml
      sgml-indent-data: t
@@ -12,9 +12,10 @@
      sgml-always-quote-attributes: t
      End:
 -->
-<article xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0">
-  <info><title>&os; &release.current; README</title>
-    
+<article xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
+  xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0">
+  <info>
+    <title>&os; &release.current; README</title>
 
     <author><orgname>The &os; Project</orgname></author>
 
@@ -36,7 +37,8 @@
       <year>2012</year>
       <year>2013</year>
       <year>2014</year>
-      <holder role="mailto:doc at FreeBSD.org">The &os; Documentation Project</holder>
+      <holder role="mailto:doc at FreeBSD.org">The &os; Documentation
+	Project</holder>
     </copyright>
 
     <legalnotice xml:id="trademarks" role="trademarks">
@@ -47,31 +49,32 @@
       &tm-attrib.general;
     </legalnotice>
 
-  <abstract>
-    <para>This document gives a brief introduction to &os;
-      &release.current;.  It includes some information on how to
-      obtain &os;, a listing of various ways to contact the &os;
-      Project, and pointers to some other sources of
-      information.</para>
-  </abstract>
+    <abstract>
+      <para>This document gives a brief introduction to &os;
+	&release.current;.  It includes some information on how to
+	obtain &os;, a listing of various ways to contact the &os;
+	Project, and pointers to some other sources of
+	information.</para>
+    </abstract>
   </info>
 
   <sect1 xml:id="intro">
     <title>Introduction</title>
 
-    <para>This distribution is a &release.type; of &os; &release.current;, the
-      latest point along the &release.branch; branch.</para>
+    <para>This distribution is a &release.type; of &os;
+      &release.current;, the latest point along the &release.branch;
+      branch.</para>
 
     <sect2>
       <title>About &os;</title>
 
       <para>&os; is an operating system based on 4.4 BSD Lite for
-	AMD64 and Intel EM64T based PC hardware (&arch.amd64;),
-	Intel, AMD, Cyrix or NexGen <quote>x86</quote> based PC hardware (&arch.i386;),
-	Intel Itanium Processor based computers (&arch.ia64;),
-	NEC PC-9801/9821 series PCs and compatibles (&arch.pc98;),
-	and &ultrasparc; machines (&arch.sparc64;).  Versions
-	for the &arm; (&arch.arm;), &mips; (&arch.mips;), and
+	AMD64 and Intel EM64T based PC hardware (&arch.amd64;), Intel,
+	AMD, Cyrix or NexGen <quote>x86</quote> based PC hardware
+	(&arch.i386;), Intel Itanium Processor based computers
+	(&arch.ia64;), NEC PC-9801/9821 series PCs and compatibles
+	(&arch.pc98;), and &ultrasparc; machines (&arch.sparc64;).
+	Versions for the &arm; (&arch.arm;), &mips; (&arch.mips;), and
 	&powerpc; (&arch.powerpc;) architectures are currently under
 	development as well.  &os; works with a wide variety of
 	peripherals and configurations and can be used for everything
@@ -88,61 +91,63 @@
 
       <para>A large collection of third-party ported software (the
 	<quote>Ports Collection</quote>) is also provided to make it
-	easy to obtain and install all your favorite traditional &unix;
-	utilities for &os;.  Each <quote>port</quote> consists of a
-	set of scripts to retrieve, configure, build, and install a
-	piece of software, with a single command.  Over &os.numports;
-	ports, from editors to programming languages to graphical
-	applications, make &os; a powerful and comprehensive operating
-	environment that extends far beyond what's provided by many
-	commercial versions of &unix;.  Most ports are also available as
-	pre-compiled <quote>packages</quote>, which can be quickly
-	installed from the installation program.</para>
+	easy to obtain and install all your favorite traditional
+	&unix; utilities for &os;.  Each <quote>port</quote> consists
+	of a set of scripts to retrieve, configure, build, and install
+	a piece of software, with a single command.  Over
+	&os.numports; ports, from editors to programming languages to
+	graphical applications, make &os; a powerful and comprehensive
+	operating environment that extends far beyond what's provided
+	by many commercial versions of &unix;.  Most ports are also
+	available as pre-compiled <quote>packages</quote>, which can
+	be quickly installed from the installation program.</para>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2>
       <title>Target Audience</title>
 
-      <para releasetype="current">This &release.type; is aimed primarily at early adopters
-	and various other users who want to get involved with the
-	ongoing development of &os;.  While the &os; development team
-	tries its best to ensure that each &release.type; works as
-	advertised, &release.branch; is very much a
-	work-in-progress.</para>
-
-      <para releasetype="current">The basic requirements for using this &release.type; are
-	technical proficiency with &os; and an understanding of the
-	ongoing development process of &os; &release.branch; (as
-	discussed on the &a.stable;).</para>
-
-      <para releasetype="current">For those more interested in doing business with &os; than
-	in experimenting with new &os; technology, formal releases
-	(such as &release.prev.stable;) are frequently more appropriate.
-	Releases undergo a period of testing and quality assurance
-	checking to ensure high reliability and dependability.</para>
-
-      <para releasetype="snapshot">This &release.type; is aimed primarily at early adopters
-	and various other users who want to get involved with the
-	ongoing development of &os;.  While the &os; development team
-	tries its best to ensure that each &release.type; works as
-	advertised, &release.branch; is very much a
-	work-in-progress.</para>
-
-      <para releasetype="snapshot">The basic requirements for using this &release.type; are
-	technical proficiency with &os; and an understanding of the
-	ongoing development process of &os; &release.branch; (as
-	discussed on the &a.stable;).</para>
-
-      <para releasetype="snapshot">For those more interested in doing business with &os; than
-	in experimenting with new &os; technology, formal releases
-	(such as &release.prev.stable;) are frequently more appropriate.
-	Releases undergo a period of testing and quality assurance
-	checking to ensure high reliability and dependability.</para>
-
-      <para releasetype="release">This &release.type; of &os; is suitable for all users.  It
-	has undergone a period of testing and quality assurance
-	checking to ensure the highest reliability and
-	dependability.</para>
+      <para releasetype="current">This &release.type; is aimed
+	primarily at early adopters and various other users who want
+	to get involved with the ongoing development of &os;.  While
+	the &os; development team tries its best to ensure that each
+	&release.type; works as advertised, &release.branch; is very
+	much a work-in-progress.</para>
+
+      <para releasetype="current">The basic requirements for using
+	this &release.type; are technical proficiency with &os; and an
+	understanding of the ongoing development process of &os;
+	&release.branch; (as discussed on the &a.stable;).</para>
+
+      <para releasetype="current">For those more interested in doing
+	business with &os; than in experimenting with new &os;
+	technology, formal releases (such as &release.prev.stable;)
+	are frequently more appropriate.  Releases undergo a period of
+	testing and quality assurance checking to ensure high
+	reliability and dependability.</para>
+
+      <para releasetype="snapshot">This &release.type; is aimed
+	primarily at early adopters and various other users who want
+	to get involved with the ongoing development of &os;.  While
+	the &os; development team tries its best to ensure that each
+	&release.type; works as advertised, &release.branch; is very
+	much a work-in-progress.</para>
+
+      <para releasetype="snapshot">The basic requirements for using
+	this &release.type; are technical proficiency with &os; and an
+	understanding of the ongoing development process of &os;
+	&release.branch; (as discussed on the &a.stable;).</para>
+
+      <para releasetype="snapshot">For those more interested in doing
+	business with &os; than in experimenting with new &os;
+	technology, formal releases (such as &release.prev.stable;)
+	are frequently more appropriate.  Releases undergo a period of
+	testing and quality assurance checking to ensure high
+	reliability and dependability.</para>
+
+      <para releasetype="release">This &release.type; of &os; is
+	suitable for all users.  It has undergone a period of testing
+	and quality assurance checking to ensure the highest
+	reliability and dependability.</para>
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
 
@@ -166,16 +171,18 @@
 	Collection, or other extra material.</para>
 
       <para>A list of the CDROM and DVD publishers known to the
-	project are listed in the <link xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/mirrors.html"><quote>Obtaining
-	&os;</quote></link> appendix to the Handbook.</para>
+	project are listed in the <link
+	  xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/mirrors.html"><quote>Obtaining
+	    &os;</quote></link> appendix to the Handbook.</para>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2>
       <title>FTP</title>
 
       <para>You can use FTP to retrieve &os; and any or all of its
-	optional packages from <uri xlink:href="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/">ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/</uri>, which is the official
-	&os; release site, or any of its
+	optional packages from <uri
+	  xlink:href="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/">ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/</uri>,
+	which is the official &os; release site, or any of its
 	<quote>mirrors</quote>.</para>
 
       <para>Lists of locations that mirror &os; can be found in the
@@ -187,8 +194,9 @@
       <para>Additional mirror sites are always welcome.  Contact
 	<email>freebsd-admin at FreeBSD.org</email> for more details on
 	becoming an official mirror site.  You can also find useful
-        information for mirror sites at the <link xlink:href="&url.articles.hubs;/">Mirroring
-        &os;</link> article.</para>
+	information for mirror sites at the <link
+	  xlink:href="&url.articles.hubs;/">Mirroring &os;</link>
+	article.</para>
 
       <para>Mirrors generally contain the ISO images generally used to
 	create a CDROM of a &os; release.  They usually also contain
@@ -208,16 +216,17 @@
       <para>For any questions or general technical support issues,
 	please send mail to the &a.questions;.</para>
 
-      <para>If you're tracking the &release.branch; development efforts, you
+      <para>If tracking the &release.branch; development efforts, you
 	<emphasis>must</emphasis> join the &a.stable;, in order to
 	keep abreast of recent developments and changes that may
 	affect the way you use and maintain the system.</para>
 
-      <para>Being a largely-volunteer effort, the &os;
-	Project is always happy to have extra hands willing to help—there are already far more desired enhancements than
-	there is time to implement them.  To contact the developers on
-	technical matters, or with offers of help, please send mail to
-	the &a.hackers;.</para>
+      <para>Being a largely-volunteer effort, the &os; Project is
+	always happy to have extra hands willing to help—there
+	are already far more desired enhancements than there is time
+	to implement them.  To contact the developers on technical
+	matters, or with offers of help, please send mail to the
+	&a.hackers;.</para>
 
       <para>Please note that these mailing lists can experience
 	<emphasis>significant</emphasis> amounts of traffic.  If you
@@ -226,13 +235,15 @@
 	preferable to subscribe instead to the &a.announce;.</para>
 
       <para>All of the mailing lists can be freely joined by anyone
-	wishing to do so.  Visit the <link xlink:href="&url.base;/mailman/listinfo">
-	&os; Mailman Info Page</link>.  This will give you more
-	information on joining the various lists, accessing archives,
-	etc.  There are a number of mailing lists targeted at special
-	interest groups not mentioned here; more information can be
-	obtained either from the Mailman pages or the <link xlink:href="&url.base;/support.html#mailing-list">mailing
-	lists section</link> of the &os; Web site.</para>
+	wishing to do so.  Visit the <link
+	  xlink:href="&url.base;/mailman/listinfo"> &os; Mailman Info
+	  Page</link>.  This will give you more information on joining
+	the various lists, accessing archives, etc.  There are
+	a number of mailing lists targeted at special interest groups
+	not mentioned here; more information can be obtained either
+	from the Mailman pages or the <link
+	  xlink:href="&url.base;/support.html#mailing-list">mailing
+	  lists section</link> of the &os; Web site.</para>
 
       <important>
 	<para>Do <emphasis>not</emphasis> send email to the lists
@@ -250,22 +261,24 @@
 	course even more welcome.</para>
 
       <para>The preferred method to submit bug reports from a machine
-	with Internet connectivity is to use the <application>Bugzilla</application>
-	bug tracker.
+	with Internet connectivity is to use the
+	<application>Bugzilla</application> bug tracker.
 	<quote>Problem Reports</quote> (PRs) submitted in this way
 	will be filed and their progress tracked; the &os; developers
 	will do their best to respond to all reported bugs as soon as
-	possible.  <link xlink:href="https://bugs.FreeBSD.org/search/">A list
-	of all active PRs</link> is available on the &os; Web site;
-	this list is useful to see what potential problems other users
-	have encountered.</para>
+	possible.  <link
+	  xlink:href="https://bugs.FreeBSD.org/search/">A list of all
+	  active PRs</link> is available on the &os; Web site; this
+	list is useful to see what potential problems other users have
+	encountered.</para>
 
       <para>Note that &man.send-pr.1; is deprecated.</para>
 
-      <para>For more information, <link xlink:href="&url.articles.problem-reports;/"><quote>Writing
-	&os; Problem Reports</quote></link>, available on the &os; Web
-	site, has a number of helpful hints on writing and submitting
-	effective problem reports.</para>
+      <para>For more information, <link
+	  xlink:href="&url.articles.problem-reports;/"><quote>Writing
+	    &os; Problem Reports</quote></link>, available on the &os;
+	Web site, has a number of helpful hints on writing and
+	submitting effective problem reports.</para>
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
 
@@ -284,47 +297,47 @@
 	provided in various formats.  Most distributions will include
 	both ASCII text (<filename>.TXT</filename>) and HTML
 	(<filename>.HTM</filename>) renditions.  Some distributions
-	may also include other formats such as Portable Document Format
-	(<filename>.PDF</filename>).
+	may also include other formats such as Portable Document
+	Format (<filename>.PDF</filename>).</para>
 
-	<itemizedlist>
-	  <listitem>
-	    <para><filename>README.TXT</filename>: This file, which
-	      gives some general information about &os; as well as
-	      some cursory notes about obtaining a
-	      distribution.</para>
-	  </listitem>
-
-	  <listitem>
-	    <para><filename>RELNOTES.TXT</filename>: The release
-	      notes, showing what's new and different in &os;
-	      &release.current; compared to the previous release (&os;
-	      &release.prev;).</para>
-	  </listitem>
-
-	  <listitem>
-	    <para><filename>HARDWARE.TXT</filename>: The hardware
-	      compatibility list, showing devices with which &os; has
-	      been tested and is known to work.</para>
-	  </listitem>
-
-	  <listitem>
-	    <para><filename>ERRATA.TXT</filename>: Release errata.
-	      Late-breaking, post-release information can be found in
-	      this file, which is principally applicable to releases
-	      (as opposed to snapshots).  It is important to consult
-	      this file before installing a release of &os;, as it
-	      contains the latest information on problems which have
-	      been found and fixed since the release was
-	      created.</para>
-	  </listitem>
-	</itemizedlist>
-      </para>
+      <itemizedlist>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para><filename>README.TXT</filename>: This file, which
+	    gives some general information about &os; as well as
+	    some cursory notes about obtaining a
+	    distribution.</para>
+	</listitem>
+
+	<listitem>
+	  <para><filename>RELNOTES.TXT</filename>: The release
+	    notes, showing what's new and different in &os;
+	    &release.current; compared to the previous release (&os;
+	    &release.prev;).</para>
+	</listitem>
+
+	<listitem>
+	  <para><filename>HARDWARE.TXT</filename>: The hardware
+	    compatibility list, showing devices with which &os; has
+	    been tested and is known to work.</para>
+	</listitem>
+
+	<listitem>
+	  <para><filename>ERRATA.TXT</filename>: Release errata.
+	    Late-breaking, post-release information can be found in
+	    this file, which is principally applicable to releases
+	    (as opposed to snapshots).  It is important to consult
+	    this file before installing a release of &os;, as it
+	    contains the latest information on problems which have
+	    been found and fixed since the release was
+	    created.</para>
+	</listitem>
+      </itemizedlist>
 
       <para>On platforms that support &man.bsdinstall.8; (currently
-	&arch.amd64;, &arch.i386;, &arch.ia64;, &arch.pc98;, and &arch.sparc64;), these documents are generally available via the
-	Documentation menu during installation.  Once the system is
-	installed, you can revisit this menu by re-running the
+	&arch.amd64;, &arch.i386;, &arch.ia64;, &arch.pc98;, and
+	&arch.sparc64;), these documents are generally available via
+	the Documentation menu during installation.  Once the system
+	is installed, you can revisit this menu by re-running the
 	&man.bsdinstall.8; utility.</para>
 
       <note>
@@ -336,8 +349,9 @@
 	  other copies are kept updated on the Internet and should be
 	  consulted as the <quote>current errata</quote> for this
 	  release.  These other copies of the errata are located at
-	  <uri xlink:href="&url.base;/releases/">&url.base;/releases/</uri> (as
-	  well as any sites which keep up-to-date mirrors of this
+	  <uri
+	    xlink:href="&url.base;/releases/">&url.base;/releases/</uri>
+	  (as well as any sites which keep up-to-date mirrors of this
 	  location).</para>
       </note>
     </sect2>
@@ -345,50 +359,54 @@
     <sect2>
       <title>Manual Pages</title>
 
-      <para>As with almost all &unix; like operating systems, &os; comes
-	with a set of on-line manual pages, accessed through the
-	&man.man.1; command or through the <link xlink:href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi">hypertext manual
-	pages gateway</link> on the &os; Web site.  In general, the
-	manual pages provide information on the different commands and
-	APIs available to the &os; user.</para>
+      <para>As with almost all &unix; like operating systems, &os;
+	comes with a set of on-line manual pages, accessed through the
+	&man.man.1; command or through the <link
+	  xlink:href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi">hypertext
+	  manual pages gateway</link> on the &os; Web site.  In
+	general, the manual pages provide information on the different
+	commands and APIs available to the &os; user.</para>
 
       <para>In some cases, manual pages are written to give
 	information on particular topics.  Notable examples of such
-	manual pages are &man.tuning.7; (a guide to performance tuning),
-	&man.security.7; (an introduction to &os; security), and
-	&man.style.9; (a style guide to kernel coding).</para>
+	manual pages are &man.tuning.7; (a guide to performance
+	tuning), &man.security.7; (an introduction to &os; security),
+	and &man.style.9; (a style guide to kernel coding).</para>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2>
       <title>Books and Articles</title>
 
       <para>Two highly-useful collections of &os;-related information,
-	maintained by the &os; Project,
-	are the &os; Handbook and &os; FAQ (Frequently Asked
-	Questions document).  On-line versions of the <link xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/">Handbook</link>
-	and <link xlink:href="&url.books.faq;/">FAQ</link>
-	are always available from the <link xlink:href="&url.base;/docs.html">&os; Documentation
-	page</link> or its mirrors.  If you install the
+	maintained by the &os; Project, are the &os; Handbook and &os;
+	FAQ (Frequently Asked Questions document).  On-line versions
+	of the <link
+	  xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/">Handbook</link> and <link
+	  xlink:href="&url.books.faq;/">FAQ</link> are always
+	available from the <link
+	  xlink:href="&url.base;/docs.html">&os; Documentation
+	  page</link> or its mirrors.  If you install the
 	<filename>doc</filename> distribution set, you can use a Web
 	browser to read the Handbook and FAQ locally.  In particular,
 	note that the Handbook contains a step-by-step guide to
 	installing &os;.</para>
 
       <para>A number of on-line books and articles, also maintained by
-        the &os; Project, cover more-specialized, &os;-related topics.
-        This material spans a wide range of topics, from effective use
-        of the mailing lists, to dual-booting &os; with other
-        operating systems, to guidelines for new committers.  Like the
-        Handbook and FAQ, these documents are available from the &os;
-        Documentation Page or in the <filename>doc</filename>
-        distribution set.</para>
+	the &os; Project, cover more-specialized, &os;-related topics.
+	This material spans a wide range of topics, from effective use
+	of the mailing lists, to dual-booting &os; with other
+	operating systems, to guidelines for new committers.  Like the
+	Handbook and FAQ, these documents are available from the &os;
+	Documentation Page or in the <filename>doc</filename>
+	distribution set.</para>
 
       <para>A listing of other books and documents about &os; can be
-        found in the <link xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/bibliography.html">bibliography</link>
-        of the &os; Handbook.  Because of &os;'s strong &unix; heritage,
-        many other articles and books written for &unix; systems are
-        applicable as well, some of which are also listed in the
-        bibliography.</para>
+	found in the <link
+	  xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/bibliography.html">bibliography</link>
+	of the &os; Handbook.  Because of &os;'s strong &unix;
+	heritage, many other articles and books written for &unix;
+	systems are applicable as well, some of which are also listed
+	in the bibliography.</para>
     </sect2>
   </sect1>
 
@@ -397,10 +415,11 @@
 
     <para>&os; represents the cumulative work of many hundreds, if not
       thousands, of individuals from around the world who have worked
-      countless hours to bring about this &release.type;.  For a
-      complete list of &os; developers and contributors, please see
-      <link xlink:href="&url.articles.contributors;/"><quote>Contributors
-      to &os;</quote></link> on the &os; Web site or any of its
+      countless hours to bring about this &release.type;.  For
+      a complete list of &os; developers and contributors, please see
+      <link
+	xlink:href="&url.articles.contributors;/"><quote>Contributors
+	  to &os;</quote></link> on the &os; Web site or any of its
       mirrors.</para>
 
     <para>Special thanks also go to the many thousands of &os; users


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