svn commit: r223290 - stable/8/share/man/man4

[Benedict Reuschling]

Author: bcr (doc committer)
Date: Sun Jun 19 11:01:38 2011
New Revision: 223290
URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/223290

Log:
  MFC r223160:
  
  Fix some wording and grammar in the BUGS section.
  
  PR:             docs/157901
  Submitted by:   Niclas Zeising (niclas dot zeising at gmail dot com)
  Reviewed by:    mav

Modified:
  stable/8/share/man/man4/snd_hda.4
Directory Properties:
  stable/8/share/man/man4/   (props changed)

Modified: stable/8/share/man/man4/snd_hda.4
==============================================================================
--- stable/8/share/man/man4/snd_hda.4	Sun Jun 19 08:53:16 2011	(r223289)
+++ stable/8/share/man/man4/snd_hda.4	Sun Jun 19 11:01:38 2011	(r223290)
@@ -669,16 +669,20 @@ and
 A few Hardware/OEM vendors tend to screw up BIOS settings, thus
 rendering the
 .Nm
-driver useless, which usually results in a state where the
+driver useless.
+This usually results in a state where the
 .Nm
-driver seems to attach and work, but without any sound. Some of
-that cases can be solved by tuning loader.conf variables. But before
-trying to fix problem that way, make sure that problem is really exists
-and the PCM audio device you are using really corresponds to expected
+driver seems to attach and work, but no sound is played.
+Some cases can be solved by tuning
+.Pa loader.conf
+variables.
+Before trying to fix problem that way, make sure that there really is a problem
+and that the PCM audio device in use really corresponds to the expected
 audio connector.
 .Pp
-Some vendors use non-standardized General Purpose I/O (GPIO) pins of codec
-to control external amplifiers. In some cases setting proper combination of
-GPIO bits may be needed to make sound work on specific device.
+Some vendors use non-standardized General Purpose I/O (GPIO) pins of the codec
+to control external amplifiers.
+In some cases setting a combination of GPIO bits may be needed to make
+sound work on a specific device.
 .Pp
 HDMI and DisplayPort audio may also require support from video driver.