svn commit: r41800 - projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports

[Chris Rees]

Author: crees
Date: Fri May 31 15:16:02 2013
New Revision: 41800
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41800

Log:
  MFH (r41782): Clarify the wording on broken ports, and remove uses of "You".
  
  Requested by:	trhodes
  Approved by:	gjb (mentor)

Modified:
  projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml
Directory Properties:
  projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/   (props changed)

Modified: projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml	Fri May 31 14:46:48 2013	(r41799)
+++ projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml	Fri May 31 15:16:02 2013	(r41800)
@@ -1869,14 +1869,13 @@ ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/
   <sect1 id="ports-broken">
     <title>Dealing with Broken Ports</title>
 
-    <para>If you come across a port that does not compile:</para>
+    <para>When coming across a port that does not build or install:</para>
 
     <orderedlist>
       <listitem>
 	<para>Find out if there is a fix pending for the port in
 	  the <ulink url="&url.base;/support.html#gnats">Problem
-	    Report database</ulink>.  If so, you may be able to use
-	  the proposed fix.</para>
+	    Report database</ulink>.  If so, the proposed fix may work.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>