svn commit: r41703 - in projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook: basics config ports

[Tom Rhodes]

Author: trhodes
Date: Tue May 21 20:50:32 2013
New Revision: 41703
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41703

Log:
  Some wording fixes.
  
  Noted by:	bcr, wblock, bjk

Modified:
  projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml
  projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml
  projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml

Modified: projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml	Tue May 21 19:51:40 2013	(r41702)
+++ projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml	Tue May 21 20:50:32 2013	(r41703)
@@ -302,13 +302,13 @@ console none                            
       managing requests for hardware devices, peripherals, memory, and
       CPU time fairly to each user.</para>
 
-    <para>Much more information about User Accounts is in the chapter
-      about <link linkend="users">accounts</link>.  For now you just
-      need to know that each person (user) who uses the computer should be
+    <para>Much more information about user accounts is in the chapter
+      about <link linkend="users">accounts</link>.  It is important to
+      understand that each person (user) who uses the computer should be
       given their own username and password.  The system keeps track
       of the people using the computer based on this username.  Since
       it is often the case that several people are working on the same
-      project Unix also provides groups.  Several users can be placed
+      project &unix; also provides groups.  Several users can be placed
       in the same group.</para>
 
     <para>Because the system is capable of supporting multiple users,

Modified: projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml	Tue May 21 19:51:40 2013	(r41702)
+++ projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml	Tue May 21 20:50:32 2013	(r41703)
@@ -1962,8 +1962,8 @@ device_probe_and_attach: cbb0 attach ret
     <para>The following section will discuss various tuning
       mechanisms and options which may be applied to disk
       devices.  In many cases, disks with mechanical parts,
-      such as <acronym>SCSI</acronym> drives, will be the bottle
-      neck driving down the overall system performance.  While
+      such as <acronym>SCSI</acronym> drives, will be the
+      bottleneck driving down the overall system performance.  While
       a solution is to install a drive without mechanical parts,
       such as a solid state drive, mechanical drives are not
       going away anytime in the near future.  When tuning disks,

Modified: projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml	Tue May 21 19:51:40 2013	(r41702)
+++ projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml	Tue May 21 20:50:32 2013	(r41703)
@@ -1795,12 +1795,12 @@ ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/
       post-install port management.  In several cases, finding
       the location of binaries if they were installed outside
       of the <envar>PATH</envar>.  Users of &man.csh.1; should run
-      the <command>rehash</command> to rebuild the known binary
+      <command>rehash</command> to rebuild the known binary
       list in the shells <envar>PATH</envar>.</para>
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-	<para>The &man.pkg.info.1; will print all installed
+	<para>The &man.pkg.info.1; command will print all installed
 	  files and their location.  For example, if the FooPackage
 	  version 1.0.0 was just installed, then the following
 	  command will show all the files installed with the
@@ -1808,7 +1808,7 @@ ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/
 
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg_info -L <replaceable>foopackage-1.0.0</replaceable> | less</userinput></screen>
 
-	<para>Configuration files are always installed in the
+	<para>Configuration files are always installed in
 	  <filename role="directory">/usr/local/etc</filename>
 	  and should definitely be consulted before attempting
 	  to use the new application.</para>
@@ -1833,8 +1833,8 @@ ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ports/
 
       <listitem>
 	<para>If the application has a web site, consult it for
-	  additional documentation, frequently asked questions, or
-	  a forum.  If the website is unknown, the following command
+	  additional documentation or a frequently asked questions
+	  page.  If the website is unknown, the following command
 	  will be useful to print out this information if it's
 	  available.</para>