svn commit: r53418 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11

Benedict Reuschling bcr at FreeBSD.org
Wed Sep 18 08:05:03 UTC 2019


Author: bcr
Date: Wed Sep 18 08:05:02 2019
New Revision: 53418
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53418

Log:
  Fix wording which was wrong ("the some") and
  remove another superfluous word in the same
  sentence while here.  Put a sentence stop after
  the command to split this long sentence into two.
  
  PR:		    240656
  Submitted by:	    pauamma at gundo.com

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml	Tue Sep 17 19:05:03 2019	(r53417)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml	Wed Sep 18 08:05:02 2019	(r53418)
@@ -1721,8 +1721,8 @@ hald_enable="YES"</programlisting>
 
       <note>
 	<para>To immediately load the kernel module into the running
-	  kernel by issuing a command like <command>kldload
-	    nvidia</command>, however it has been noted that the some
+	  kernel issue a command like <command>kldload
+	    nvidia</command>. However, it has been noted that some
 	  versions of <application>&xorg;</application> will not
 	  function properly if the driver is not loaded at boot time.
 	  After editing <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>, a


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