svn commit: r53655 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config
Chris Rees
crees at FreeBSD.org
Wed Dec 4 11:53:13 UTC 2019
Author: crees
Date: Wed Dec 4 11:53:12 2019
New Revision: 53655
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53655
Log:
Simplify language by removing spurious comma.
While here, "must" conjugates with plural as well as singular.
PR: docs/241674
Submitted by: PauAmma <pauamma at gundo.com>
Reviewed by: bcr (first point)
Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D22648
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml Wed Dec 4 10:02:19 2019 (r53654)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml Wed Dec 4 11:53:12 2019 (r53655)
@@ -986,8 +986,8 @@ lo0: flags=8049<UP,LOOPBACK,RUNNING,MULTICAST> m
before adding any lines.</para>
</note>
- <para>In the case, there is no <acronym>DHCP</acronym> server,
- the <acronym>NIC</acronym>(s) have to be configured manually.
+ <para>If there is no <acronym>DHCP</acronym> server,
+ the <acronym>NIC</acronym>(s) must be configured manually.
Add a line for each <acronym>NIC</acronym> present on the
system, as seen in this example:</para>
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