svn commit: r49874 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status

[Warren Block]

Author: wblock
Date: Fri Jan 20 21:41:10 2017
New Revision: 49874
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/49874

Log:
  Minor edits.
  
  Sponsored by:	iXsystems

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-10-2016-12.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-10-2016-12.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-10-2016-12.xml	Fri Jan 20 17:09:05 2017	(r49873)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-10-2016-12.xml	Fri Jan 20 21:41:10 2017	(r49874)
@@ -116,13 +116,13 @@
 
       <p>&os; 11.0-RELEASE shipped with support for the "enhanced
 	networking" support in EC2 C3, C4, R3, I2, D2, and M4
-	(excluding m4.16xlarge) instances; this provides significantly
+	(excluding m4.16xlarge) instances.  This provides significantly
 	higher network performance than the virtual networking
 	available on older EC2 instances and with older versions of
 	&os;.</p>
 
       <p>&os; 11.0-RELEASE and later also use indirect segment disk
-	I/Os, which yield ~20% higher throughput with equal or lower
+	I/Os, which yield approximately 20% higher throughput with equal or lower
 	latency, and support the 128-vCPU x1.32xlarge instance
 	type.</p>