svn commit: r51332 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview

[Eitan Adler]

Author: eadler
Date: Sat Dec 23 01:19:43 2017
New Revision: 51332
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51332

Log:
  FDP Primer: add missing word; pet igor
  
  PR:		224531
  Submitted by:	ljuba.bsd at gmail.com

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml	Fri Dec 22 19:44:54 2017	(r51331)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml	Sat Dec 23 01:19:43 2017	(r51332)
@@ -74,8 +74,8 @@
       documentation.  First, subscribe to the &a.doc;.  Some team
       members also interact on the <literal>#bsddocs</literal>
       <acronym>IRC</acronym> channel on
-      <link xlink:href="http://www.efnet.org/">EFnet</link>.  These people
-      can help with questions or problems involving the
+      <link xlink:href="http://www.efnet.org/">EFnet</link>.  These
+      people can help with questions or problems involving the
       documentation.</para>
 
     <procedure>
@@ -86,9 +86,10 @@
 	  This meta-package installs all of the software needed to
 	  edit and build &os; documentation.  The
 	  <application>Subversion</application> package is needed to
-	  obtain a working of the documentation and generate patches with.</para>
+	  obtain a working copy of the documentation and generate
+	  patches with.</para>
 
-         <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg install docproj subversion</userinput></screen>
+	  <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg install docproj subversion</userinput></screen>
       </step>
 
       <step>
@@ -222,7 +223,9 @@
 
       <listitem>
 	<para><emphasis>Web site</emphasis>: This is the main &os;
-	  presence on the web, visible at <link xlink:href="https://www.freebsd.org/index.html">https://www.FreeBSD.org/</link>
+	  presence on the web, visible at <link
+	    xlink:href="https://www.freebsd.org/index.html">
+	    https://www.FreeBSD.org/</link>
 	  and many mirrors around the world.  The web site is
 	  typically a new user's first exposure to &os;.</para>
       </listitem>
@@ -243,11 +246,13 @@
 
     <para>Documentation commit messages are visible with
       <command>svn log</command>.  Commit messages are also
-      archived at <uri xlink:href="&a.svn-doc-all.url;">&a.svn-doc-all.url;</uri>.</para>
+      archived at <uri xlink:href="&a.svn-doc-all.url;">
+	&a.svn-doc-all.url;</uri>.</para>
 
-    <para>Web frontends to both of these repositories are available at <link
-      xlink:href="https://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/doc/"></link> and <link
-        xlink:href="https://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/base/"></link>.</para>
+    <para>Web frontends to both of these repositories are available
+      at <link xlink:href="https://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/doc/"></link>
+      and <link
+	xlink:href="https://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/base/"></link>.</para>
 
     <para>Many people have written tutorials or how-to articles about
       &os;.  Some are stored as part of the <acronym>FDP</acronym>