svn commit: r48037 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status

[Benjamin Kaduk]

Author: bjk
Date: Sun Jan 17 02:27:55 2016
New Revision: 48037
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48037

Log:
  A couple grammar/style tweaks from koobs

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-10-2015-12.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-10-2015-12.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-10-2015-12.xml	Sat Jan 16 18:29:11 2016	(r48036)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2015-10-2015-12.xml	Sun Jan 17 02:27:55 2016	(r48037)
@@ -2490,7 +2490,7 @@
 
       <p>The Security Team reorganisation, first proposed to Core
 	during a meeting at BSDCan this year by Gleb Smirnoff — core
-	member and newly-appointed deputy Security Officer — has now
+	member and newly-appointed deputy Security Officer (SO) — has now
 	been accomplished.  In order to improve the project's
 	responsiveness to security alerts, to maintain security on
 	privileged information received in confidence before general
@@ -2502,7 +2502,7 @@
 	security problems, and connecting them with appropriate
 	individuals within the project with the technical expertise to
 	address the identified concerns.  The SO team was cut down to just
-	the Security Officer and his deputy, assisted by a secretary, and
+	the Security Officer and their deputy, assisted by a secretary, and
 	with input and help in drafting security advisories from former
 	and any potential future Security Officers plus liasons with Core,
 	Cluster Administration and Release Engineering.</p>