svn commit: r47469 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style
Warren Block
wblock at wonkity.com
Thu Oct 1 15:39:34 UTC 2015
On Thu, 1 Oct 2015, Jason Helfman wrote:
> On Thu, Oct 1, 2015 at 7:55 AM, Warren Block <wblock at freebsd.org> wrote:
> Author: wblock
> Date: Thu Oct 1 14:55:39 2015
> New Revision: 47469
> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47469
>
> Log:
> Swap two words transposed.
>
> Modified:
> head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml
>
> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml Thu Oct 1 14:34:32 2015 (r47468)
> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml Thu Oct 1 14:55:39 2015 (r47469)
> @@ -196,7 +196,7 @@
> <para>For example, commands:</para>
>
> <informalexample>
> - <para>Wrong: Use the command <command>svn</command> to
> + <para>Wrong: Use the <command>svn</command> command to
> update sources.</para>
> </informalexample>
>
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> Why we are documenting what shouldn't be done? I thought that this was discouraged.
It is. This section has been around forever, but a bigger issue is that
this type of redundancy is difficult to explain without showing the
wrong way. Suggestions welcome.
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