svn commit: r47099 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction

[Dru Lavigne]

Author: dru
Date: Sun Jul 26 12:48:37 2015
New Revision: 47099
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47099

Log:
  Further improvements to paragraph.
  
  Reviewed by: wblock
  Sponsored by: Essen DevSummit Hackathon

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 26 10:23:02 2015	(r47098)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 26 12:48:37 2015	(r47099)
@@ -1144,15 +1144,11 @@
 	      &os; source (the term <quote>committer</quote> comes
 	      from <command>commit</command>, the source control
 	      command which is used to bring new changes into the
-	      repository).  The best way of making submissions for
-	      review is to use the &man.send-pr.1; command, which is
-	      included in releases prior to &os; 10.1, or submit
-	      issues using the <link
-		xlink:href="https://bugs.FreeBSD.org/submit/">problem
-		report form</link>.  If a problem report has not
-	      received any attention, please engage the <link
-		xlink:href="&url.base;community/mailinglists.html">community
-		mailing lists</link>.</para>
+	      repository).  Anyone can submit a bug to the <link
+		xlink:href="https://bugs.FreeBSD.org/submit/">Bug
+	      Database</link>.  Before submitting a bug report, the
+	    &os; mailing lists, IRC channels, or forums can be used to
+	    help verify that an issue is actually a bug.</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	</varlistentry>