svn commit: r44944 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide
Benedict Reuschling
bcr at FreeBSD.org
Sat May 24 20:44:44 UTC 2014
Author: bcr
Date: Sat May 24 20:44:43 2014
New Revision: 44944
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44944
Log:
Remove some redundant words, add capitalization to titles, as well as
redundant markup and words around <filename>.
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml Sat May 24 20:33:49 2014 (r44943)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml Sat May 24 20:44:43 2014 (r44944)
@@ -306,7 +306,7 @@ You need a Passphrase to protect your se
</sect1>
<sect1 xml:id="kerberos-ldap">
- <title>Kerberos and LDAP web password for &os; cluster</title>
+ <title>Kerberos and LDAP web Password for &os; Cluster</title>
<para>Some of the services in the &os; cluster require a Kerberos
password. In the &os; cluster, LDAP is proxying to Kerberos, so
@@ -1866,7 +1866,7 @@ U stable/9/share/man/man4/netmap.4
&prompt.user; <userinput>cd sendmail</userinput>
&prompt.user; <userinput>svn merge -c r<replaceable>261190</replaceable> ^/vendor/<replaceable>sendmail/dist</replaceable> .</userinput></screen>
- <para><literal>^</literal> is an alias for the the
+ <para><literal>^</literal> is an alias for the
repository path.</para>
</tip>
@@ -3027,9 +3027,9 @@ Relnotes: yes</programlisting>
or
<filename>$HOME/.ssh/id_rsa.pub</filename>)
to the person setting you up as a committer so it can be put
- into the
+ into
<filename><replaceable>yourlogin</replaceable></filename>
- file in
+ in
<filename>/etc/ssh-keys/</filename> on
<systemitem>freefall</systemitem>.</para>
</step>
@@ -3101,8 +3101,8 @@ Relnotes: yes</programlisting>
<listitem>
<para>Respect existing maintainers (if listed in the
<varname>MAINTAINER</varname> field in
- <filename>Makefile</filename> or in the
- <filename>MAINTAINER</filename> file in the top-level
+ <filename>Makefile</filename> or in
+ <filename>MAINTAINER</filename> in the top-level
directory).</para>
</listitem>
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