svn commit: r44923 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/solid-state

[Benedict Reuschling]

Author: bcr
Date: Fri May 23 17:36:54 2014
New Revision: 44923
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44923

Log:
  Capitalize words in title tags, remove redundant words and rewrite one
  sentence in the process. This makes this file igor clean.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/solid-state/article.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/solid-state/article.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/solid-state/article.xml	Fri May 23 17:28:33 2014	(r44922)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/solid-state/article.xml	Fri May 23 17:36:54 2014	(r44923)
@@ -167,10 +167,10 @@ pseudo-device   md              # memory
       those directories.  In the execution of
       <filename>/etc/rc.d/var</filename>, one other
       <filename>rc.conf</filename> variable comes into play –
-      <literal>varsize</literal>.  The
-      <filename>/etc/rc.d/var</filename> file creates a
-      <filename>/var</filename> partition based on the value of
-      this variable in <filename>rc.conf</filename>:</para>
+      <literal>varsize</literal>.  A <filename>/var</filename>
+      partition is created by <filename>/etc/rc.d/var</filename> based
+      on the value of this variable in
+      <filename>rc.conf</filename>:</para>
 
     <programlisting>varsize=8192</programlisting>
 
@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ pseudo-device   md              # memory
       logging or temporary file creation and destruction can do the
       same.  Therefore, in addition to removing the
       <literal>swap</literal> entry from your
-      <filename>/etc/fstab</filename> file, you should also change the
+      <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>, you should also change the
       Options field for each filesystem to <literal>ro</literal> as
       follows:</para>
 
@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ pseudo-device   md              # memory
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1>
-    <title>Building a File System From Scratch</title>
+    <title>Building a File System from Scratch</title>
 
     <para>Because ATA compatible compact-flash cards are seen by &os;
       as normal IDE hard drives, you could theoretically install &os;
@@ -251,30 +251,30 @@ pseudo-device   md              # memory
 
     <procedure>
       <step>
-	<title>Partitioning your flash media device</title>
+	<title>Partitioning Your Flash Media Device</title>
 
 	<para>After booting with the kern and mfsroot floppies, choose
 	  <literal>custom</literal> from the installation menu.  In
 	  the custom installation menu, choose
 	  <literal>partition</literal>.  In the partition menu, you
-	  should delete all existing partitions using the
-	  <keycap>d</keycap> key.  After deleting all existing
-	  partitions, create a partition using the <keycap>c</keycap>
-	  key and accept the default value for the size of the
+	  should delete all existing partitions using
+	  <keycap>d</keycap>.  After deleting all existing
+	  partitions, create a partition using <keycap>c</keycap>
+	  and accept the default value for the size of the
 	  partition.  When asked for the type of the partition, make
 	  sure the value is set to <literal>165</literal>.  Now write
-	  this partition table to the disk by pressing the
-	  <keycap>w</keycap> key (this is a hidden option on this
+	  this partition table to the disk by pressing
+	  <keycap>w</keycap> (this is a hidden option on this
 	  screen).  If you are using an ATA compatible compact flash
 	  card, you should choose the &os; Boot Manager.  Now press
-	  the <keycap>q</keycap> key to quit the partition menu.  You
+	  <keycap>q</keycap> to quit the partition menu.  You
 	  will be shown the boot manager menu once more - repeat the
 	  choice you made earlier.</para>
       </step>
 
       <step>
-	<title>Creating filesystems on your flash memory
-	  device</title>
+	<title>Creating Filesystems on Your Flash Memory
+	  Device</title>
 
 	<para>Exit the custom installation menu, and from the main
 	  installation menu choose the <literal>fixit</literal>
@@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ pseudo-device   md              # memory
       </step>
 
       <step>
-	<title>Placing your filesystem on the flash media</title>
+	<title>Placing Your Filesystem on the Flash Media</title>
 
 	<para>Mount the newly prepared flash media:</para>
 
@@ -364,7 +364,7 @@ pseudo-device   md              # memory
       the Apache web server will be provided.</para>
 
     <sect2>
-      <title>cron</title>
+      <title>Cron</title>
 
       <para>Upon boot, <filename>/var</filename> gets populated by
 	<filename>/etc/rc.d/var</filename> using the list from
@@ -391,7 +391,7 @@ pseudo-device   md              # memory
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2>
-      <title>syslog</title>
+      <title>Syslog</title>
 
       <para><filename>syslog.conf</filename> specifies the locations
 	of certain log files that exist in