svn commit: r44763 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports
Benedict Reuschling
bcr at FreeBSD.org
Mon May 5 18:37:48 UTC 2014
Author: bcr
Date: Mon May 5 18:37:48 2014
New Revision: 44763
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44763
Log:
Rephrase a section from the last commit to avoid the use of "you" and
"simply".
Noticed by: wblock
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Mon May 5 16:03:30 2014 (r44762)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Mon May 5 18:37:48 2014 (r44763)
@@ -202,9 +202,10 @@
for security issues related to the application or install
<package>ports-mgmt/portaudit</package>. Once installed, type
<command>portaudit -F -a</command> to check all installed
- applications for known vulnerabilities. If you are using
- <application>pkg</application>, the audit functionality is
- built in. Simply run: <command>pkg audit -F</command>.</para>
+ applications for known vulnerabilities. When
+ <application>pkg</application> is being used the audit
+ functionality is built in. Execute <command>pkg audit
+ -F</command> to get a report on vulnerable packages.</para>
</warning>
<para>The remainder of this chapter explains how to use packages
More information about the svn-doc-head
mailing list