svn commit: r46061 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook: advanced-networking bsdinstall geom security
Benedict Reuschling
bcr at FreeBSD.org
Wed Dec 3 20:32:05 UTC 2014
Author: bcr
Date: Wed Dec 3 20:32:03 2014
New Revision: 46061
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46061
Log:
Change some sentences where it makes sense to remove the redundant
filename and word. Translators can ignore this.
Obtained from: igor -E output
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.xml
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:04:29 2014 (r46060)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:32:03 2014 (r46061)
@@ -2194,7 +2194,7 @@ freebsdap 00:11:95:c3:0d:ac 1
<para>Debugging support is provided by
&man.wpa.supplicant.8;. Try running this utility manually
- with the <option>-dd</option> option and look at the
+ with <option>-dd</option> and look at the
system logs.</para>
</listitem>
@@ -4294,8 +4294,8 @@ cd /usr/src/etc; make distribution</prog
<step>
<para>On the
<acronym>TFTP</acronym> server, read
- <filename>/var/log/xferlog</filename> to ensure that the
- <filename>pxeboot</filename> file is being retrieved from
+ <filename>/var/log/xferlog</filename> to ensure that
+ <filename>pxeboot</filename> is being retrieved from
the correct location. To test this example
configuration:</para>
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:04:29 2014 (r46060)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:32:03 2014 (r46061)
@@ -1451,10 +1451,10 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID
<para>Multiple file system partitions can be created and some
people prefer a traditional layout with separate partitions
- for the <filename>/</filename>, <filename>/var</filename>,
- <filename>/tmp</filename>, and <filename>/usr</filename> file
- systems. See <xref linkend="bsdinstall-part-manual-splitfs"/>
- for an example.</para>
+ for <filename>/</filename>, <filename>/var</filename>,
+ <filename>/tmp</filename>, and <filename>/usr</filename>. See
+ <xref linkend="bsdinstall-part-manual-splitfs"/> for an
+ example.</para>
<para>The <literal>Size</literal> may be entered with common
abbreviations: <emphasis>K</emphasis> for kilobytes,
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:04:29 2014 (r46060)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:32:03 2014 (r46061)
@@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ Done.</screen>
uses a traditional file system layout, with partitions for
<filename>/</filename>, swap, <filename>/var</filename>,
<filename>/tmp</filename>, and <filename>/usr</filename>. A
- single <filename>/</filename> file system and a swap partition
+ single <filename>/</filename> and a swap partition
will also work.</para>
<para>Partitions on the mirror do not have to be the same size
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:04:29 2014 (r46060)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:32:03 2014 (r46061)
@@ -427,8 +427,8 @@ Enter new password:</screen>
<para>After installation of this package or port, the system may
be checked using the following command. It will produce a lot
- of information and will require some manual pressing of the
- <keycap>ENTER</keycap> key:</para>
+ of information and will require some manual pressing of
+ <keycap>ENTER</keycap>:</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>rkhunter -c</userinput></screen>
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