svn commit: r44629 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot
Dru Lavigne
dru at FreeBSD.org
Tue Apr 22 17:52:05 UTC 2014
Author: dru
Date: Tue Apr 22 17:52:05 2014
New Revision: 44629
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44629
Log:
Fix a few grammos.
Sponsored by: iXsystems
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.xml Tue Apr 22 17:49:42 2014 (r44628)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/boot/chapter.xml Tue Apr 22 17:52:05 2014 (r44629)
@@ -81,9 +81,9 @@
Adventures of Baron Munchausen</citetitle>. A character had
fallen part way down a manhole, and pulled himself out by
grabbing his bootstraps and lifting. In the early days of
- computing the term <firstterm>bootstrap</firstterm> was applied
- to the mechanism used to load the operating system, which has
- become shortened to <quote>booting</quote>.</para>
+ computing, the term <firstterm>bootstrap</firstterm> was applied
+ to the mechanism used to load the operating system. It has
+ since become shortened to <quote>booting</quote>.</para>
<indexterm><primary><acronym>BIOS</acronym></primary></indexterm>
@@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ boot:</screen>
<para>Use <filename>kernel.GENERIC</filename> to refer to the
default kernel that comes with an installation, or
- <filename>kernel.old</filename><indexterm><primary><filename>kernel.old</filename></primary></indexterm>
+ <filename>kernel.old</filename>,
to refer to the previously installed kernel before a system
upgrade or before configuring a custom kernel.</para>
@@ -549,7 +549,7 @@ boot:</screen>
<indexterm><primary>console</primary></indexterm>
<para>A user can specify this mode by booting with
- <option>-s</option>, or by setting the <envar>boot
+ <option>-s</option> or by setting the <envar>boot
_ single</envar> variable in
<application>loader</application>. It can also be reached
by running <command>shutdown now</command> from multi-user
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