svn commit: r44585 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status

Wed Apr 16 18:41:06 UTC 2014

Author: pgj
Date: Wed Apr 16 18:41:05 2014
New Revision: 44585
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44585

Log:
  - Improve the ZFSguru 2014Q1 report as requested by the submitter

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-01-2014-03.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-01-2014-03.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-01-2014-03.xml	Wed Apr 16 18:27:11 2014	(r44584)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-01-2014-03.xml	Wed Apr 16 18:41:05 2014	(r44585)
@@ -2418,20 +2418,22 @@ device vt_efifb</pre>
 
     <body>
       <p>ZFSguru is a multifunctional server appliance with a strong
-	emphasis on storage.  It desired to bring BSD and ZFS technology
-	to a wider audience, while at the same time pleasing more
-	advanced users as well with unique features.  A <q>vanilla</q>
-	ZFSguru installation comes with only Samba and a web-interface
-	setup, but can be extended easily by installing addons called
-	<q>services</q> to add functionality as desired.  This prevents
-	users from running stuff they do not need and do not want.
-	Advanced users can still use ZFSguru as they would a normal &os;
-	installation with a 100% ZFS setup (<q>Root-on-ZFS</q>).
-	ZFSguru does not strip away anything, and uses a
-	<tt>GENERIC</tt>-like kernel with only some additional stuff
-	added like InfiniBand networking, Device Polling and AltQ.  This
-	means you can use a ZFSguru installation as you would use a &os;
-	installation.</p>
+	emphasis on storage.  It wants to deliver all the great BSD and
+	ZFS technology to a wider audience, while at the same time
+	pleasing more advanced users as well with unique features and
+	customization.</p>
+
+      <p>A <q>vanilla</q> ZFSguru installation comes with only Samba and
+	a web-interface setup, but can be extended easily by installing
+	addons called <q>services</q> to add functionality as desired.
+	This prevents users from running programs they do not need and
+	do not want.  Advanced users can still use ZFSguru as they would
+	a normal &os; installation with a 100% ZFS setup
+	(<q>Root-on-ZFS</q>).  ZFSguru does not strip away anything, and
+	uses a <tt>GENERIC</tt>-like kernel with only some additional
+	settings added like InfiniBand networking, Device Polling and
+	AltQ.  This means you can use a ZFSguru installation as you
+	would use a &os; installation.</p>
 
       <p>In the first month of 2014, ZFSguru has released beta9 version
 	of the web interface.  This release brings vastly improved support
@@ -2448,8 +2450,9 @@ device vt_efifb</pre>
 	graphics drivers.  That is, the latest and greatest of &os;
 	graphics development.  The ZFSguru project plans to release
 	<tt>stable/10</tt> builds in the near future which also have the
-	MFC'ed patches for <tt>vt(4)</tt>.  Please see the
-	<tt>vt(4)</tt> entry for more information.</p>
+	MFC'ed patches for <tt>vt(4)</tt>, the KMS-enabled system
+	console with Unicode support.  Please see the <tt>vt(4)</tt>
+	entry for more information.</p>
 
       <p>Support for ZFS version 5000 is now universal across 9.2, 10.0
 	and <tt>head</tt> builds.  LZ4 compression is the key feature for
@@ -2472,7 +2475,7 @@ device vt_efifb</pre>
 	It can be used like a firmware — restoring the machine to
 	the exact state and configuration of the snapshot configuration.
 	It allows users to maintain a backup of their ZFSguru
-	configuration and makes upgrading to a newer ZFSguru system
+	configuration and allows upgrading to a newer ZFSguru system
 	version without any hassle.</task>
 
       <task>Automated system builds should bring more system image
@@ -2481,9 +2484,9 @@ device vt_efifb</pre>
       <task>New website with new forum and new login system.</task>
 
       <task>Developer website with GitLab setup, allowing bugreports,
-	code contributions and wiki + wall messages.  Note that GitLab has
-	also been provided as ZFSguru service, for those interested in
-	trying GitLab.</task>
+	code contributions, wiki, and wall messages.  Note that GitLab
+	has also been provided as ZFSguru service, for those interested
+	in trying GitLab.</task>
     </help>
   </project>
 
