svn commit: r41637 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status

[Gabor Pali]

Author: pgj
Date: Fri May 17 13:03:01 2013
New Revision: 41637
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41637

Log:
  - Minor grammatical corrections in the 2013Q1 status report
  
  Submitted by:	theraven

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-01-2013-03.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-01-2013-03.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-01-2013-03.xml	Thu May 16 23:43:11 2013	(r41636)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-01-2013-03.xml	Fri May 17 13:03:01 2013	(r41637)
@@ -620,7 +620,7 @@
     </body>
 
     <help>
-      <task>Evaluating if it is worth to migrate any of the other
+      <task>Evaluating if it is worthwhile to migrate any of the other
 	callout(9) consumers to the new interface.</task>
       <task>Move callout consumers still using the legacy
 	timeout()/untimeout() interface to callout_*() in order to get
@@ -1096,7 +1096,7 @@
       <p>The project progressed well since February:</p>
 
       <ul>
-	<li>Konstantin committed is TTM port to 10-CURRENT.</li>
+	<li>Konstantin committed his TTM port to 10-CURRENT.</li>
 
 	<li>With the help of John Baldwin (jhb) and Andriy Gapon (avg),
 	  the Video BIOS situation greatly improved: the
@@ -1121,17 +1121,17 @@
 	 the VM folks.</li>
       </ul>
 
-      <p><a href="http://www.yakaz.com/">Yakaz</a> lended
+      <p><a href="http://www.yakaz.com/">Yakaz</a> loaned
 	Jean-Sébastien a computer which allows him to test a
 	RV630-based discrete card and, in the future, other PCIe cards.
 	Several users already kindly tested the driver.  Big thanks to
 	all those contributors!</p>
 
-      <p>In its current state, the driver allows to have a simple X
+      <p>In its current state, the driver allows a simple X
 	session (no OpenGL), run common applications, watch movies,
 	change the resolution and enable additional monitors with
 	<tt>xrandr(1)</tt>.  The most blocking issue now is the OpenGL
-	deadlock which prevents to run modern compositors/desktop
+	deadlock which prevents running modern compositors/desktop
 	environment, games and WebGL demos.  We are not ready for a
 	"Call For Testers" yet.</p>
     </body>