svn commit: r42392 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style

[Warren Block]

Author: wblock
Date: Tue Jul 23 00:45:09 2013
New Revision: 42392
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42392

Log:
  Whitespace-only fixes.  Translators, please ignore.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml	Tue Jul 23 00:40:25 2013	(r42391)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml	Tue Jul 23 00:45:09 2013	(r42392)
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
 	A trivial example is better than no example.  A good example
 	is better yet.  Do not give bad examples, identifiable by
 	apologies or sentences like <quote>but really it should never
-	be done that way</quote>.  Bad examples are worse than no
+	  be done that way</quote>.  Bad examples are worse than no
 	examples.  Give good examples, because <emphasis>even when
 	  warned not to use the example as shown</emphasis>, the
 	reader will usually just use the example as shown.</para>
@@ -197,8 +197,8 @@
 	  <para>For example, commands:</para>
 
 	  <informalexample>
-	    <para>Wrong:  Use the command <command>svn</command> to update
-	      sources.</para>
+	    <para>Wrong: Use the command <command>svn</command> to
+	      update sources.</para>
 	  </informalexample>
 
 	  <informalexample>
@@ -219,7 +219,8 @@
 	  </informalexample>
 
 	  <para>Manual page references (the second example uses
-	    <sgmltag>citerefentry</sgmltag> with the <literal>&man.csh.1;</literal> entity):.</para>
+	    <sgmltag>citerefentry</sgmltag> with the
+	    <literal>&man.csh.1;</literal> entity):.</para>
 
 	  <informalexample>
 	    <para>Wrong:  See <command>man csh</command> for more
@@ -299,13 +300,14 @@
 
       <para>Opening tags increase the indentation level by two spaces.
 	Closing tags decrease the indentation level by two spaces.
-	Blocks of eight spaces at the start of a line should be replaced
-	with a tab.  Do not use spaces in front of tabs, and do not
-	add extraneous whitespace at the end of a line.  Content
-	within elements should be indented by two spaces if the
-	content runs over more than one line.</para>
+	Blocks of eight spaces at the start of a line should be
+	replaced with a tab.  Do not use spaces in front of tabs, and
+	do not add extraneous whitespace at the end of a line.
+	Content within elements should be indented by two spaces if
+	the content runs over more than one line.</para>
 
-      <para>For example, the source for this section looks like this:</para>
+      <para>For example, the source for this section looks like
+	this:</para>
 
       <programlisting><sgmltag class="starttag">chapter</sgmltag>
   <sgmltag class="starttag">title</sgmltag>...<sgmltag class="endtag">title</sgmltag>
@@ -406,9 +408,9 @@
 	  to content at the same time as changes to
 	  formatting</emphasis>.</para>
 
-      <para>When content and whitespace changes are kept separate, translation teams
-	can easily see whether a change was content that must be translated
-	or only whitespace.</para>
+      <para>When content and whitespace changes are kept separate,
+	translation teams can easily see whether a change was content
+	that must be translated or only whitespace.</para>
 
       <para>For example, if two sentences have been added to a
 	paragraph so that the line lengths now go
@@ -477,12 +479,17 @@ GB.  Hardware compression …</lite
 	<tbody>
 	  <row>
 	    <entry>CD-ROM</entry>
-	    <entry><sgmltag class="starttag">acronym</sgmltag><literal>CD-ROM</literal><sgmltag class="endtag">acronym</sgmltag></entry>
+
+	    <entry><sgmltag
+		class="starttag">acronym</sgmltag><literal>CD-ROM</literal><sgmltag
+		class="endtag">acronym</sgmltag></entry>
 	  </row>
 
 	  <row>
 	    <entry>DoS (Denial of Service)</entry>
-	    <entry><sgmltag class="starttag">acronym</sgmltag><literal>DoS</literal><sgmltag class="endtag">acronym</sgmltag></entry>
+	    <entry><sgmltag
+		class="starttag">acronym</sgmltag><literal>DoS</literal><sgmltag
+		class="endtag">acronym</sgmltag></entry>
 	  </row>
 
 	  <row>