svn commit: r42386 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview
Warren Block
wblock at FreeBSD.org
Mon Jul 22 21:25:09 UTC 2013
Author: wblock
Date: Mon Jul 22 21:25:08 2013
New Revision: 42386
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42386
Log:
Whitespace-only fixes. Translators, please ignore.
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml Mon Jul 22 21:23:03 2013 (r42385)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml Mon Jul 22 21:25:08 2013 (r42386)
@@ -137,12 +137,12 @@
<title>Quick Start</title>
<para>Some preparatory steps must be taken before editing the &os;
- documentation. First, subscribe to the &a.doc;.
- Some team members also interact on the
- <literal>#bsddocs</literal>
+ documentation. First, subscribe to the &a.doc;. Some team
+ members also interact on the <literal>#bsddocs</literal>
<acronym>IRC</acronym> channel on
<ulink url="http://www.efnet.org/">EFnet</ulink>. These people
- can help with questions or problems involving the documentation.</para>
+ can help with questions or problems involving the
+ documentation.</para>
<procedure>
<step>
@@ -153,9 +153,10 @@
</step>
<step>
- <para>Install a local working copy of the documentation
- from a mirror of the &os; repository in
- <filename class="directory">~/doc</filename> (see <xref linkend="working-copy"/>).</para>
+ <para>Install a local working copy of the documentation from a
+ mirror of the &os; repository in
+ <filename class="directory">~/doc</filename> (see
+ <xref linkend="working-copy"/>).</para>
<screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>svn checkout https://<replaceable>svn0.us-west.FreeBSD.org</replaceable>/doc/head <replaceable>~/doc</replaceable></userinput></screen>
</step>
@@ -205,7 +206,8 @@
<para>Review the output and edit the file to fix any problems
shown, then rerun the command to find any remaining
- problems. Repeat until all of the errors are resolved.</para>
+ problems. Repeat until all of the errors are
+ resolved.</para>
</step>
<step>
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