svn commit: r40767 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq

Eitan Adler eadler at FreeBSD.org
Sun Jan 27 12:51:22 UTC 2013


Author: eadler
Date: Sun Jan 27 12:51:21 2013
New Revision: 40767
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40767

Log:
  The "F" renders much more distinctly as a literal than a "C" or a "S"
  leading to an odd looking set of words.  Instead of <literal> use a
  capital letter.
  
  Submitted by:	Perry Hutchison <perryh at pluto.rain.com>
  Approved by:	bcr (mentor)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Sun Jan 27 12:51:19 2013	(r40766)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Sun Jan 27 12:51:21 2013	(r40767)
@@ -7362,8 +7362,7 @@ ATDT1234567</programlisting>
 	</question>
 
 	<answer>
-	  <para>FCS stands for <literal>F</literal>rame
-	    <literal>C</literal>heck <literal>S</literal>equence.  Each
+	  <para>FCS stands for Frame Check Sequence.  Each
 	    PPP packet has a checksum attached to ensure that the data
 	    being received is the data being sent.  If the FCS of an
 	    incoming packet is incorrect, the packet is dropped and the


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