svn commit: r40600 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq

[Eitan Adler]

Author: eadler
Date: Sun Jan 13 06:02:31 2013
New Revision: 40600
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40600

Log:
  Reduce and subtract extra words.
  
  Approved by:	bcr (mentor)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Sun Jan 13 06:00:25 2013	(r40599)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Sun Jan 13 06:02:31 2013	(r40600)
@@ -6996,8 +6996,8 @@ deny pred1 deflate deflate24 protocomp a
 	    to see a hangup from the server.</para>
 
 	  <para>This can be avoided by allowing the peer to start
-	    negotiating with the following line in your
-	    <filename>ppp.conf</filename> file:</para>
+	    negotiating with the following line in
+	    <filename>ppp.conf</filename>:</para>
 
 	  <programlisting>set openmode passive</programlisting>
 
@@ -7103,8 +7103,8 @@ deny pred1 deflate deflate24 protocomp a
 	    appear to have frozen.  This is because &man.ppp.8; is
 	    waiting for the command to complete.</para>
 
-	  <para>If you wish to execute commands like this, use the
-	    <command>!bg</command> command instead.  This will execute
+	  <para>To execute commands like this, use
+	    <command>!bg</command> instead.  This will execute
 	    the given command in the background, and &man.ppp.8; can
 	    continue to service the link.</para>
 	</answer>