svn commit: r41061 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge

[Eitan Adler]

Author: eadler
Date: Thu Feb 28 13:17:34 2013
New Revision: 41061
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41061

Log:
  Word sentence differently.
  
  Submitted by:	wblock
  Approved by:	jkois (mentor)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml
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--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml	Thu Feb 28 13:14:14 2013	(r41060)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml	Thu Feb 28 13:17:34 2013	(r41061)
@@ -2577,11 +2577,9 @@ Script done, …</screen>
 	    files.</para>
 	</warning>
 
-	<para>Next, build a dummy set of directories to install the
-	  new <filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and other
-	  files into <filename
-	    class="directory">/var/tmp/root</filename> is a reasonable
-	  choice:</para>
+	<para>Build a temporary set of directories into which the new
+	  <filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and other files
+	  can be installed:</para>
 
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mkdir /var/tmp/root</userinput>
 &prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/src/etc</userinput>