svn commit: r41024 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users
Benjamin Kaduk
kaduk at MIT.EDU
Fri Feb 22 04:06:47 UTC 2013
On Thu, 21 Feb 2013, Warren Block wrote:
> On Thu, 21 Feb 2013, Benjamin Kaduk wrote:
>
>> On Thu, 21 Feb 2013, Dru Lavigne wrote:
>>
>>> @@ -700,11 +683,9 @@ passwd: done</screen>
>>> <secondary>quotas</secondary>
>>> </indexterm>
>>> <indexterm><primary>disk quotas</primary></indexterm>
>>> - <para>Disk quotas limit disk usage to users, and
>>> - they
>>> - provide a way to quickly check that usage without
>>> - calculating it every time. Quotas are discussed in <xref
>>> - linkend="quotas"/>.</para>
>>> + <para>Disk quotas limit disk usage to users and provide a way to
>>> + quickly check that usage without calculating it every time.
>>
>> This sentence is still not quite there.
>> Maybe "Disk quotas limit the disk usage available to users" or "limit the
>> disk usage of users"?
>
> "Disk quotas limit the amount of disk space available to users"
Sounds good, thanks.
-Ben
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